（2）
Recently I’ve conducted a survey on if girls should 66．
lose weight among my classmates．Most of the students held the 67.
opinion girls should lose weight．In their opinion，girls who are slim 68．
are more beautiful and attractively，and they are more confident in 69．
their study and work than those who are fat．However，a few of the 70．
students have a different opinion．We think it's a waste of time 71 .
and money．In addition，lose weight may be harmful to their 72．
body and mind；After all，anything is more important than 73．
some day，they will become fatter．So it is no need for young girls 75．
to lose weight as long as they are healthy．
【答案】 66．If改为whether 67．held改为hold 68．第一个girls前加that 69．attractively改为attractive
70．正确
（3）
Dogs are one kind of the pet animals，most of them are liked 76．
by people．They are very useful．When you are in troubles， 77
it can help you．For example，in the North Pole，when you 78
want to go out to do something，you must take a sledge pulling 79
by dogs．They would help you to do the things you want , 80．
I have a little dogs at home．It’s very lovely and it’s only 81
about four month I love it very much．When I get home， 82
it will sway the tail and walk up to me．When it feels hunger， 83．
it will bark loudly．Now it was very fat．I like dogs， 84．
because they are too useful and lovely． 85．
【答案】76. them改为which 77. troubles改为trouble 78. 正确 79. pulling改为pulled 80. would改为will 81. dogs改为dog 82. month改为months 83. hunger改为hungry 84.was改为is 85. too改为very
（4）
I’m a middle school student. I once had very happy 76.______
family, and now everything has changed only because 77. ______
of my father. He used to being a very good doctor and 78. ______
was often praised for
his patients. He did housework 79. ______
almost every day and took good care of the family. 80. ______
However, he’s quite different now. He plays card all night 81. ______
and often quarreled with my mother. It seems impossible 82. ______
to have my attention fixing upon my books. I have failed 83. ______
two exams. I’m afraid it’ll destroy my family as good as 84. ______
my father himself. Could you help me and give to me some advice? 85. ______
【答案】76. very 前加a 77. and改为but 78. being改为be 79. for改为by
80. 正确 81. card改为cards 82. quarreled改为quarrels 83.fixing改为fixed 84. good改为well 85. 去掉to
2009届考前短文改错精选精练（2）
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm(宿舍)． 76．
Instead, they rented houses outside the school．There are 77．
advantages for all．Living in a dorm can increase friendship and 78．
cooperation among classmates，but of course it is safer．A dorm 79．
is more like a society，where enables students to learn to get along with 80．
the each other，thus preparing for the social life later．As for renting 81．
houses to live alone，it’s better for study as you can feel freely in 82．
your own room without interrupted by others．As a result，you 83．
can have more time and devote yourself to study wholeheartedly． 84．
But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school． 85．
Anyhow as a student，I prefer living in a dorm．
【答案】76．正确 77.rented改为rent 78．all改为both 79. but改为and
80．where改为which 81．去掉the 82．freely改为free
83. without后加being 84．study改为studying 85.problem改为problems
（2）
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two 76
weeks ago．I have been thinking about a question you asked 77
me．In my opinion，you should go back after you finish your 78
studies abroad．For one reason，that you are studying is badly 79
needed nowadays in
our country．It will be
quite easily for you 80
to find a good job．In fact，I know a few big company here in 81
our city hope to hire people like you．For another reason， 82
I think it will be
very much more convenient for you to look 83
after your parents as they are getting old．Therefore this is only 84
my point of view．It is up for you to make a right choice． 85
【答案】76．√ 77．A改为the 78．go改为come 79．That改为what 80．easily改为easy 81．company改为companies 82．city后加which／that 83．去掉very
84. Therefore改为But 85．for改为to
（3）
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday． 76．
There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket 77．
window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets． 78．
In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager 79．
to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened 80．
my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got 81．
separated from my parents．I had hard time looking 82．
for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt 83．
alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money, 84．
so I had to walk to home，covering as much as 5 kilometers． 85．
【答案】
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday． 76． √
There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket 77． visitors
window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets． 78． bought
In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager 79． so
to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened 80． Frightening
my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got 81． Unfortunately
separated from my parents．I had∧ hard time looking 82． a
for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt 83． but
alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money, 84． lonely
so I had to walk to
home，covering as
much as 5 kilometers．85． to
（4）
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble in deal with 76．
the new high school life．I'd like to give you any advice． 77．
Firstly，you must work hard at all lesson and try your best 78．
to get good grades．By this way，you are likely to attend an 79．
ideal university for a better future. Secondly，you need get 80．
along well with your classmates and teachers，that will 81．
help you to build good interpersonal relationships．Thirdly， 82．
you have to learn what to live on your own．The ability 83．
to survive in society is also of the great importance for us． 84．
I hope you will find these ideas usefully．All the best! 85．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】76．deal改为dealing 77．any改为some 78．lesson改为lessons 79．By改为In 80．need后加to 81．That改为which 82．√ 83．What改为how 84．去掉the 85．usefully改为useful
2009届考前短文改错精选精练（1）4篇
Wise men don’t always act as wise as we think．At times 76．
they maybe done something silly：Because we always think they 77．
are well known，so the stories about their foolish acts are still 78．
widely talked throughout the world in modern times．For example， 79．
Beethoven，the great composer of Austria was said to have insisted 80．
on paying a waiter in a restaurant for a dinner he has not eaten or 81．
ever ordered；the British physicist Newton，while lives in London， 82．
cut two holes in the two doors of his flat，one big，other small， 83．
so as for his two cats to pass through them．He only thought the 84．
bigger cat could not get through the smaller holes easily． 85．
【答案】76．wise改为wisely 77．done改为do 78．去掉so
79．talked后加about 80．正确 81．has改为had 82．lived改为living
83．other前加the 84．去掉them 85．holes改为hole
（2）
Nowadays many graduate are looking forward 76. _____
to get employment in big cities, not willing to work 77. ______
in the countryside. Unfortunately, there are enough : 78.______
chances to satisfy most of the job hunters in big cities, 79. ______
while in the countryside talented people are bad needed 80. ______
but a lot of posts are waiting for you. You can put your 81. ______
abilities to good use and you will able to make greater 82. ______
contributions of building a modern countryside. 83. _____.
Therefore, I believe in you can have as bright a future 84._______
in the countryside as we will have in the cities. 85. _____
【答案】76. graduate改为 graduates 77. getting 78. are后加 not 79. 正确 80. bad改为badly 81.but改为and/so 82.will后加be 83. of改为to 84.去掉 in 85. we改为you
（3）
It is real a good chance to have all of you here 76.
We have spent several precious weekend in learning 77.
in the English Club．Because we have been members 78.
for a short period of time．We have made a great progress． 79.
That is because we are all very active and the 80.
activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides， 81.
the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make 82.
the activities lively and interested I am very pleased to say 83.
that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far．I 84.
am looking forward to seeing all of them again in the near future 85.
【答案】76.real改为really 77. weekends 78. Because-Though/ Although 79. made后去掉a 80. 正确81. and改为but 82. his改为their 83. interested改为interesting 84. improved前加have 85. them改为you
（4）
第一节 短文改错（共10小 题；每小题1分，满分10分）
When I was young, I didn’t know what friendship. When I 76．______
stayed with my friends, a warm feeling came out of the bottom from 77．______
my heart. Now I have grown up and got many friend. And I 78 ______
have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship. When I am happy, 79．______
they are also happy and shared the happiness with me. When I 80．______
make progress, they will be very exciting. Instead, when 81．______
I’m in a difficult situation, they will offer help to me. So 82．______
friendship is never an one-way ticket. If we want to get it, 83．______
we must treat others well at first. We should always be ready to 84．______
help others, especially that they are in difficult situations. 85．______
【答案】76．在friendship后加was 77．from改为of 78．friend改为friends 79．删去been 80．shared改为share 81．exciting改为excited 82．So改为But 83．an改为a 84．正确 85．that改为when
2009 届高考英语作文优秀范文十篇
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某对外发行的英文报纸对中国群众体育现状进行了调查，请根据下列图表和所给提示，用英语写一篇报道，以便向该报投稿。
说明：1．体质下降；
2．应充分认识体育锻炼的重要性；
3．采取措施，提供人们锻炼的场地和器材（facilities ）；
4．字数：120 ― 140. 报道的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Recently,
we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of
the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
Over
half of the people say they haven’t got enough time to take exercises. 34.9
percent of them complain they don’t have places where they can relax themselves
and that there are not enough training facilities, while another 12.9 percent
of the people feel that they live too far away from the training centers. Some
of them even don’t know how to train.
For lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with training facilities.
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以下是某英文报联合你校对你市（Kangming City）1998年到2008年家庭消费变化的图表，请据此写一篇短文，作一文字说明。文章的开头已经给出。词数110左右。
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图表1 图表2
The
average family income in our
The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008.
Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.
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请观察下图，请以“Where is my home?”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括：
1．简述图所反映的两个环境问题；
2．简析成因；
3．发表自己的看法。
注：文章的开头已经给出，不计人词数；参考词汇：口罩mask
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Where is my home?
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the sky. But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear masks. Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much pollution. Waste is being poured into rivers and seas. Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, too. Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so dirty. The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental protection.
Personally, man can not live alone on the earth. Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from happening.
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假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该难还是该容易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。
赞成偏难，反对偏易
赞成偏易，反对偏难
1．喜欢挑战，越难越好；
2．有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，
改进学习方法。
1．题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考；
2．题目容易，易获高分，有自信。
注意：1．词数150左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter．
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge．The harder, the better．It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.
Others，however，are against a difficult exam．In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination．Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence．
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy,teachers will not know how we are getting on with our studies, but if it is too difficult, we will lose heart
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从学校毕业，或上大学，或步入社会，毕业意味着前进、意味着选择。请以Graduation and moving on为题，写一篇100词左右的毕业感言。
要求：1、毕业前活动：照相、留言等；
2、心情(依依不舍，又要前进)及原因等。首句已经给出，不计入总词数。
Graduation and Moving on
Graduation is a time when we move on, from school to university, or out into the real world．
Before graduating from school, We usually have a variety of activities, like taking pictures, leaving encouraging words to one another in memory of our friendship, or giving presents to our teachers express our thanks and show respect．
However, I have mixed emotions about moving on．I want to stay and have more fun with my friends, but I will have to move on．Graduation means taking a step forward---moving onward and upward．Thus I can learn more and will be more skilled and experienced．
Graduation is coming whether we are ready or not．Let's make great efforts so that our dream will come true．
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假定你是某英文报的小记者，最近你对大学生的就业观点及专家对此的看法进行了采访。请根据以下要点写一篇题为“Different Job Outlooks”的短文，词数100词左右。
学生观点：1．大部分想找一份薪金丰厚的工作；
2．部分持观望态度，等待良机；
3．少数想自己创业。
专家观点：不应坐等，要尽快找份工作，理由是：
1．积累经验；
2．挣钱养活自己；
3．明年就业形势或许更严峻。
Different Job Outlooks
Nowadays university graduates have different job outlooks. For most of them, to find a job with satisfactory pay is their most important wish while majority want to be self ? employed. However, a certain number of graduates are not in a hurry to hunt for jobs. They are just waiting for better chances. Toward this point of view, some experts warn that it is not wise to be just waiting. They advise that graduates should find a regular, full-time job as quickly as possible so that they can earn money to support themselves and get working experience, which will help to find a better position later. Moreover, it might be more difficult to find a satisfactory job next year.
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不知不觉我们已进入高三年级，高考一天天逼近。为了在学习上不落后于同学，很多学生搬出学校的集体寝室，在学校附近租了房子。就这一现象请你写一篇英语短文来发表自己的看法。内容包括：
1在校外租房子的利与弊。(至少各写两点)
2．你同意还是反对这种做法?并陈述你的理由。(至少写两点)
注意：
1．词数为120个左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好(不计入总宇数)。
参考词汇：宿舍dormitory
Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year．The college entrance examination is approaching day by day．Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count．
It cannot be denied that they have their own time schedule after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room．What’s important，with their morns taking care of them，they can spare more time for studies．However，there exist some disadvantages．For example，sometimes their minds go wandering easily without competitors round．Furthermore，a student who is left alone to study at rather an easy atmosphere tends to get distracted or even feel tired easily．
In spite of the fact that the dorm life is full of fun and friendship，noisy songs and shouts in the dorms after evening classes only quiet down long after the blackout at 10：30 p. m.，leading to a serious lack of sleep，I think．Worse still，they don’t make fullest use of time to study so，from my perspective．I prefer to live in the rented room．
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假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。
赞同
反对
1．重建该园辉煌景象
1．保留原样更为合理
2．中华文明具体体现
2．警示人们不忘过去
3．旅游新景点
3．其他建筑同样反映中华文化（如故宫、颐和园等），重建并非必须
4．如部分恢复，可与废墟对照，让人们记住历史
4．破坏该地生态环境
注意：1．词数：150左右 2．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。
参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace
Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860． Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.
Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.
Those who disagree think it more
reasonable to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past.
We should never forget the history. Other buildings like
Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.
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法国一家拍卖公司于今年2月25日在巴黎公开拍卖从中国掠夺的鼠首和兔首铜像, 此举激起中国人民的强烈愤慨。请你根据下表提示, 用英语写一篇短文。
文物背景
1.鼠首和兔首铜像制作于清代, 是圆明园诸多装饰品之一；
2.1860年, 英法联军火烧圆明园, 抢走包括鼠首和兔首铜像等在内的大量文物。
文物事件
1.今年二月在巴黎公开拍卖；
2.中国政府坚决反对, 要求按国际法无偿归还；
3.法国公司一意孤行；
4.中国人民积极行动, 采取措施阻止拍卖。
你的感想
(请考生谈谈对此事的看法, 列举两至三条)
注意: 1.对所给要点, 逐一陈述, 可适当增加细节, 使其连贯, 不简单翻译。
2.词数: 150左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
3.参考词汇. auction n. & vt. 拍卖relic [C] n.文物, 遗物
Last
month in
As
is known to all, the two bronze animal heads
were made during the Qing Dynasty to decorate Yuanmingyuan. In 1860, the
British and French troops broke into
The
Chinese government is strongly against this auction and has repeatedly asked
for the free return of them according to the international laws. At the same
time, the Chinese people have taken actions, too. Some people even flew to
In
my opinion, the auction should be strongly
condemned. Not only has it hurt the feelings of the Chinese people but
also it brought shame to
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学校里一些同学互相攀比，追求时髦和高档消费。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”的英文演讲稿。
现象
仿明星发型；
穿名牌衣服、名牌鞋子；
使用高档手机；
原因
追求美；
爱面子；
感觉很酷；
你的看法
(请考生自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”.
Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life. They have the same hairstyles as their favorable stars and wear top brand of clothes and shoes. Some use expensive mobile phones.
The reasons why they do so are as follows. Firstly, they hope to look smart and special. Secondly, they want to win others’ admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool .
As far as I am concerned, we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily life because it is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What’s more , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school to receive normal education. Last but not least, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable.
Thank you for listening!
平遥县2009年4月高三高补质检
文科综合能力测试
本试卷分第Ⅰ卷（选择题）和第Ⅱ卷（非选择题）两部分，考试分数300分，时间150分钟。 王维彬 雷建明
命题人：陈晓华 王风丽
郭 明 孙永祥
第Ⅰ卷
注意事项：
1．答第Ⅰ卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号、考试科目涂写在答题卡上。
2．每小题选出答案后，用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。不能答在试题卷上。
3．本卷共35小题，每小题4分，共140分。在每题给出的四个选项中，只有一项是最符合题目要求的。
以色列空军
1．巴以冲突由来以久，下列属于引发巴以冲突的一组是①民族宗 教矛盾 ②领土争端 ③争夺控制矿产资源 ④耶路撒冷归属
A．①②③ B．①②④
C．②③④ D．①③④
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6．该山村的优质苹果树多种植在山腰而少在山谷，原因是山腰果树开花早。图4中正确反映这一现象的是
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