2009届考前短文改错精选精练（2）
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm(宿舍)． 76．
Instead, they rented houses outside the school．There are 77．
advantages for all．Living in a dorm can increase friendship and 78．
cooperation among classmates，but of course it is safer．A dorm 79．
is more like a society，where enables students to learn to get along with 80．
the each other，thus preparing for the social life later．As for renting 81．
houses to live alone，it’s better for study as you can feel freely in 82．
your own room without interrupted by others．As a result，you 83．
can have more time and devote yourself to study wholeheartedly． 84．
But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school． 85．
Anyhow as a student，I prefer living in a dorm．
【答案】76．正确 77.rented改为rent 78．all改为both 79. but改为and
80．where改为which 81．去掉the 82．freely改为free
83. without后加being 84．study改为studying 85.problem改为problems
（2）
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two 76
weeks ago．I have been thinking about a question you asked 77
me．In my opinion，you should go back after you finish your 78
studies abroad．For one reason，that you are studying is badly 79
needed nowadays in
our country．It will be
quite easily for you 80
to find a good job．In fact，I know a few big company here in 81
our city hope to hire people like you．For another reason， 82
I think it will be
very much more convenient for you to look 83
after your parents as they are getting old．Therefore this is only 84
my point of view．It is up for you to make a right choice． 85
【答案】76．√ 77．A改为the 78．go改为come 79．That改为what 80．easily改为easy 81．company改为companies 82．city后加which／that 83．去掉very
84. Therefore改为But 85．for改为to
（3）
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday． 76．
There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket 77．
window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets． 78．
In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager 79．
to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened 80．
my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got 81．
separated from my parents．I had hard time looking 82．
for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt 83．
alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money, 84．
so I had to walk to home，covering as much as 5 kilometers． 85．
【答案】
My parents and I went to the park last Sunday． 76． √
There were lots of visitor standing in front of the ticket 77． visitors
window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets． 78． bought
In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager 79． so
to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened 80． Frightening
my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got 81． Unfortunately
separated from my parents．I had∧ hard time looking 82． a
for them，and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt 83． but
alone without any companions．Worse still，I had no money, 84． lonely
so I had to walk to
home，covering as
much as 5 kilometers．85． to
（4）
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble in deal with 76．
the new high school life．I'd like to give you any advice． 77．
Firstly，you must work hard at all lesson and try your best 78．
to get good grades．By this way，you are likely to attend an 79．
ideal university for a better future. Secondly，you need get 80．
along well with your classmates and teachers，that will 81．
help you to build good interpersonal relationships．Thirdly， 82．
you have to learn what to live on your own．The ability 83．
to survive in society is also of the great importance for us． 84．
I hope you will find these ideas usefully．All the best! 85．
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】76．deal改为dealing 77．any改为some 78．lesson改为lessons 79．By改为In 80．need后加to 81．That改为which 82．√ 83．What改为how 84．去掉the 85．usefully改为useful