10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable

result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is

常用句型:

开头:

When it comes to ..., some think ...

There is a public debate today that ...

A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?

Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.

提出观点:

Now there is a growing awareness that...

It is time we explore the truth of ...

Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.

进一步提出观点:

... but that is only part of the history.

Another equally important aspect is ...

A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...

Besides, other reasons are...

提出假想例子的方式:

Suppose that...

Just imagine what would be like if...

It is reasonable to expect...

It is not surprising that...

举普通例子:

For example(instance),...

... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)

A good case in point is...

A particular example for this is...

引用:

One of the greatest early writers said ...

"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...

"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).

"......". How often we hear such words like there.

讲故事

(先说故事主体),this story is not rare.

..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.

..., the story still has a realistic significance.

提出原因:

There are many reasons for ...

Why .... , for one thing,...

The answer to this problem involves many factors.

Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...

The first reason can be obiviously seen.

Most people would agree that...

Some people may neglect that in fact ...

Others suggest that...

Part of the explanation is ...

进行对比:

The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...

Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...

Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.

A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...

承上启下:

To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...

A study of ... will make this point clear

让步:

Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...

I do not deny that A has its own merits.

结尾:

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw

the conclusion that ...

In summary, it is wiser ...

In short...

感言:好词好句固然好,但要用得好、用得妙才能写出好文章。故以下附:

作文六戒

 一戒:移花接木,如出一辙

 升学考试的作文最忌讳抄袭,不少浑浑噩噩的学生为谋取高分,在考前把套题范围广的范文一篇篇在大脑中做备份,然而,每年能押中作文考题者却寥寥无几,而且即便押中也不一定能得到阅卷教师的好评,得不偿失。

 二戒:言不及义,离弦走板

 作文第二大忌讳的便是偏题。这里说的是用以前写过的文章押题,文章确实是自己原创,但牵强附会地套题使得文章的立意、形式过于陈旧、生硬。大多数写作水平不咋样的人很难让事先备好的文章不偏不倚套中考试文章的要求

 三戒:唇焦舌敝,呶呶不休

 动笔之前如果不耐心构思整个文章的立意、文体而直接奋笔疾书,写到一半很容易混淆自己的创作思路,在时间有限而自己又一筹莫展的情形下很可能写出紊乱、重复的语言,即便洋洋洒洒写了一大堆,依然云山雾罩没有把想要表达的立意清晰展示出。

 四戒:迷离叵测,不知所云

 一些文章,看起来字字珠玑、微言大义,实际上是在故作深奥,即便你写文章时并无愚弄阅卷教师之意,而在教师的眼中却是一堆显摆自己的空洞大道理。

 五戒:沧桑潦倒,无病呻吟

 考试作文偏好积极向上的文章,也接受抒发真情实感的文章。然而就有那么些同学,把自己心中郁积的闷气全往试卷上发,这种暮气沉沉、索然无味的文章,阅卷老师心情再好也被字里行间充斥的懊丧搅乱。

 六戒:花里胡哨,言过其实

 虽然好词佳句在文章中扮演的角色不容小觑,但它们依然是瑕瑜互见的双刃剑。如果文章中使用过多的华丽辞藻而故事情节并不咋的,那样只会让人产生华而不实甚至卖弄词汇的感觉,阅卷教师只觉得这文章的作者非常适合编写词汇手册。

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