Question

【题目】假如你是李明，5月18日星期六这一天，你与几位同班同学一起参观了水上公园 (Water Park)。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇日记。

(1)乘.坐大巴约一小时后到达目的地，游客多；

(2)上午划船，下午看了许多动物，例如…：

(3)碰到几位外国朋友并与他们交谈：

(4)看到了乱扔垃圾、插队等不良现象：

(5)你的感想…

参考词汇：.插队cut in line

要求：

(1)词数：80100个。

(2)短文的开头己给出，不计入总词数

(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

May 18, Saturday Fine

Today I visited Water Park with several of my classmates.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】May 18, Saturday Fine

Today I visited Water Park with several of mv classmates. It took us about an hour to get there by bus. When we arrived, there were a lot of visitors.

In the morning, we went boating and enjoyed ourselves. We saw many animals, such as pandas, giraffes and monkeys in the afternoon. They are so lovely. We met some foreign guests and talked with them happily. However, during our visit we saw some people throwing rubbish and cutting in line.

In my opinion, it is our duty to protect the environment and follow the rules in public. And I hope changes will take place in the future.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，要求写参观日记。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态和关键单词等问题。为了使语言更显亲切，在写作时主语用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。同时注意时间状语与时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，适当使用连词，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，做到语意连贯。