Question

【题目】 书面表达（共1题，计15分）

如今，随着亚健康的人越来越多，更多的人开始关注健康。你认为怎样才能保持健康呢？请根据提示以“How to keep healthy”为题，写一篇英语短文来简单说一下保持健康的方法。

提示：

①平衡膳食；

②适当锻炼；

③早睡早起。

要求：

①短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；

②80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to keep healthy

Everyone wants to be healthy, but do you know how to keep healthy?

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Keep Healthy

Health is very important for everybody.Then how can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips:

First,,you should have healthy eating habits.You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much meat.Don’t drink coffee too much,it’s bad for you.

Second,you can play sports.Sports can make you stronger and healthier.You can play baketball with your friends when you are free.You can go to the mouuntains with your family.

Third,Be happy.A happy man lives longer than a sad man .So sing a song or watch a fun movie.You can do anything to mak e you happy.

At last,stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness.

If you do these things ,I believe you can be a healthy man.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文所给内容比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些所给的点表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，是提出建议，给出自己的观点的，注意说话的语气及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本例文层次紧凑，开始有总说，最后一段总结，中间四部分分别说明了题中给出的要点。用first,second,third,at last层次鲜明，逻辑性很强。因为文章是提出建议，所以范文中用了许多委婉的表达，如should ,You’d better等。