Question

【题目】书面表达。（20%）

以前，你英语成绩不好。你害怕英语，上课听不懂老师说的，经常犯语法错误，不敢用英语和他人交流。现在，你上课记笔记，常常听英语磁带，喜欢唱英文歌曲。觉得英语很简单。你的朋友李涛在英语学习上遇到了困难。请根据你自身的经历谈谈你的感受，并给李涛以学习英语的建议。80-100词，开头和结尾以给出，不计入总词数。

Dear LI Tao,

Thank you for your last letter. I know that ___________________________________

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Yours Wang Bo

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Tao,

Thank you for your last letter. I know that you want some advice about English.Before, my English was not good. I was afraid of English, I couldn’t understand the teacher in class.And I often made mistakes in grammar.I didn’t use English to talk with other people. Now, I take notes in class, and I often listen to English tapes, sing English songs. I think English is very simple.You should listen to the teacher carefully in class.You should talk with classmates in English as much as possible.I hope you can improve your English soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如Now, I take notes in class, and I often listen to English tapes, sing English songs. I think English is very simple.You should listen to the teacher carefully in class.You should talk with classmates in English as much as possible.等等。