Question

【题目】假如你是Tina，你的笔友Gary想要去月球旅行，向你询问应该如何准备行囊，请你根据下列表格提示给他提几点建议，并以信件的形式给他回复。可适当发挥，不少于60词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

提示：

原因	建议
月球晚上温度低	多带点厚衣服
月球上没有食物和水	带足够的食物和水
……	……

Dear Gary,

I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m happy for you about that.

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Yours,

Tina

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Gary,

I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m happy for you about that.

I know something about the Moon and I would like to give you some advice. Firstly, it’s cold on the Moon at night. You should take some warm clothes. Secondly, there is no water or food on the Moon, so you must take enough water and food for yourself. Thirdly, there is little gravity on the Moon, so you’d better wear special clothes to protect yourself. Last, don’t forget to take your camera. Then you can take some special pictures.

Have a nice trip!

Yours,

Tina

【解析】

这是一篇表格作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下去月球旅行应该如何准备行囊。所提供的材料中列举了去的原因和建议。主要从月球晚上温度低、月球上没有食物和水等几个方面去介绍。在作文中要适当加入你的建议，包括多带点厚衣服、带足够的食物和水。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称和第二人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I know something about the Moon and I would like to give you some advice. 我知道一些关于月亮的事情，我想给你一些建议。这句话是由and 连接的并列句。

【高分句型二】

Thirdly, there is little gravity on the Moon, so you’d better wear special clothes to protect yourself. 第三，月球上几乎没有重力，所以你最好穿特别的衣服来保护自己。so you’d better wear special clothes to protect yourself. 表示原因的句子。