Question

【题目】假设你叫李林，你们班级要选拔新班长，你想向班主任胡老师推荐张平。请根据表格内容，写一封100词左右的推荐信给胡老师。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。

姓名	张平
个性	1).自信，不害怕在许多人面前演讲； 2).勤奋，从不介意为班级做额外的工作； 3).有条理，从不忘记需要做的事。
喜好	1).最喜欢蓝色，因为……; 2).爱好音乐，因为……; 3). ……。
愿望	希望世界上没有战争，所有人过幸福生活。

Dear Mr Hu,
I'm writing to recommend Zhang Ping as our new monitor. I think he has some strong qualities for this position.
I think Zhang Ping is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr Hu,

I'm writing to recommend Zhang Ping as our new monitor. I think he has some strong qualities for this position.

Zhang Ping is confident. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people. He is hard-working. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He is organized and never forgets the things he needs to do.

His favourite color is blue because blue represents calm and it is good fo rmind and body. He likes music because music can make people feel relaxed. He also likes jogging because it's good for his health.

He loves peace and he hopes there is no war in the world and everyone can enjoy a happy life.

I think Zhang Ping is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope you can agree with me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Lin

【解析】本文是一封推荐信，在信中要叙述推荐这个人的原因，叙述张平平时的表现及爱好，所以句子应该用一般现在时，句子的主语用第三人称单数，要注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，使用自己熟悉的句式及词汇。要注意上下文的衔接。在写作中，首先，要根据试题里的“提示”确定一个写作中心，再根据这个中心，列出写作提纲，提纲一定要包含所提供的情景要点，同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。然后，用自己熟悉的词汇与句型扩展成篇。自己不熟悉的词汇与句型能换则换，一定不要用，以免用错扣分。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题。千万不要写那些与主题无关的内容。扩展时要注意短文的字数，要写够要求的字数，文章要用一般现在时。用第三人称。以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分。也不要扩展得太多，字数达到要求既可，以免浪费时间或出现更多的错误而扣分。文章要符合逻辑，注意语句连贯性。