Question

【题目】对于“中学生在校是否可以使用手机”，不同的学生有不同的看法，请你根据表格提示写一篇短文。

观点	赞成	反对
理由	1). 便于联系，…… 2). 获取信息，……	1). 浪费信息，…… 2). 危害身心健康……
你的观点和理由

要求：1).包括所有要点，不得逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；
2）书写规范、工整，条理清楚；
3）文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等；
4）词数：80-100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones, can middle school students use mobile phones at school? Different students have different opinions about it.

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones, can middle school students use mobile phones at school?Different students have different opinions about it.Some students think they can use mobile phones at school. First, it's convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends. Second, they can search what they need on mobile phones. For ex-ample, they can look up new words and look through news.

However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time.

Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. Besides, it's unhealthy for the mind and the body, such as hurting eyes, making some bad friends.

In my opinion, students can't use mobile phones at school.It's bad for our health and study.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们对中学生在学校是否可以用手机这一话题做一个介绍。这是一篇议论文，短文的中心已经给出，内容主要分成三个方面，一个是赞成中学生在学校用手机的；另一个是反对的；最后来表达自己的看法。议论文属于比较容易写的作文，因为它论点明确，短文的结构很清楚。这篇作文的难点有两个：一个是注意英语表达和汉语习惯上的不同，句式的表达要从整体考虑，而不能逐词翻译；另一个难点是用自己的话来发表自己的观点，这要求学生们发挥自己的想象力，将这一部分的内容补充完整。评判作文水平还有一个标准是整篇文章的表达是否流畅，因此学生们在写作的时候，应使用一些高级的句式和短语，增强文章的表现力。