2.误:I still remember the day on when I first came to Beijing.
正:I still remember the day when
I first came to Beijing.
或:I still remember the day on
which I first came to Beijing.
译:我仍记得我第一次来到北京那天的情景。
析:应删去on,因为when在这里的意思是on which,否则介词on就重复了,或把when改为which。
(五)、在作先行词的时间名词或地点名词后错用了关系代词或关系副词。