题目内容
9.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear guests,
On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We
are luck to have you here in middle of our English Week Activities.
As planning,we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this program
was to develop our interest in English learning and practically abilities in listening
and speaking.The program consist of the following activity:recitation,singing,
word spelling,story telling and so on.The show will begin at two o'clock in this
afternoon at the Student Centre.Dear guests,we are welcome to take part in
some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence but I sincerely
wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.
分析 这是一篇欢迎词.你高兴你能来参加我们的英语周活动.我们将有很多的节目,目的是为了提高英语学习的兴趣和听说能力.真诚地欢迎你.
解答 Dear guests,
On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are luck to have you here in∧middle of our English Week Activities.As planning,we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this program was to develop our interest in English learning and practically abilities in listening and speaking.The program consist of the following activity:recitation,singing,word spelling,story telling and so on.The show will begin at two o'clock in this afternoon at the Student Centre.Dear guests,we are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence but I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.
详解:
1.luck改为lucky;形容词错误.句中luck作系动词的表语,要用形容词形式.
2.加the;短语搭配错误.in the middle of在…中间.
3.planning改为planned;分词错误.句中as后接比较状语从句,从句中省略了主语和系动词,即as it is planned按照计划.
4.was改为is;时态错误.文章讲述的是说话时的情况,要用一般现在时态.
5.practically改为practical;形容词错误.句中practical修饰名词abilities,要用形容词形式.
6.consist改为consists;主谓一致错误.句中的主谓是单数,谓语动词要保持一致.
7.activity改为activities;名词错误.句意表达的是复数.
8.in去掉;介词错误.this afternoon在句中作时间状语,不用介词.
9.we改为you;逻辑指代错误.句意表达的是说话对象.
10.but改为and;连词错误.句意表达的是承接,不是转折.
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.
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A. | of which | B. | of who | C. | of that | D. | of whom |
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