题目内容
4.假定英语诹上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改,增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
On the first day when I went to high school,I felt exciting.After 9years'study,I felt I was so closely to university.During the first year,I made many friends.I got to know all of my classmates.Because the school work was tough.I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends.When second year came,I was arranged to other class.I was worried that no one could talk to me,but I made new friends quickly.Now it was the last year of my high school life,but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress.High school life is challenging for me,but I won't give out.
分析 作者在本文中讲述了自己上高中后的心情和两年的高中生活.上了高中作者感觉自己离大学很近了,第一年作者结交了很多朋友,尽管学习生活非常艰难,作者还是和朋友们分享幸福与悲伤.第二年作者被安排到了另外一个班级,很快又结识了新朋友.现在时第三年了,作者决心努力学习,争取更大的进步.
解答 On the first day when I went to high school,I felt exciting.After 9years'study,I felt I was so closely to university.During the first year,I made many friends.I got to know all of my classmates.Because the school work was tough.I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends.When∧second year came,I was arranged to other class.I was worried that no one could talk to me,but I made new friends quickly.Now it was the last year of my high school life,but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress.life is challenging for me,but I won't give out.
详解:
1.exciting改为excited;考查分词用作形容词,过去分词作形容词修饰人,现在分词作形容词修饰事物,所以这里用excited作形容词修饰"I".
2.closely改为close;考查形容词,此处用形容词作系动词was的表语,be close to意为"接近,靠近".
3.Because 改为Although/Though;考查让步状语从句,这里用Although/Though引导一个让步状语从句,意为"尽管学习生活非常艰难…".
4.for 改为 with;考查介词,share sth with sb 是固定搭配,意为"与某人分享某物".
5.second前面加the;考查定冠词,序数词second前面要加定冠词the,表示"第二年".
6.other改为another;考查形容词,other意为"其他的",another意为"另一个",结合句意"我被安排到另一个班",可知此处应该用another.
7.but改为and;考查连词,分析句子结构,此处应该用and连接并列成分.
8.was改为is;考查动词的时态,此处讲述的是现在的情况,故用一般现在时is.
9.去掉more;考查比较级,more可以帮助多音节单词构成比较级,但不能修饰比较级,所以比较级形式harder前面的more应该去掉.
10.out改为in;考查介词,give out 意为"发布,分发",give in 意为"屈服,让步",分析句意应为"生活对我来说具有挑战性,但我不会屈服",所以此处应该用give in.
点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文,了解短文基本大意,确定文章的基本时态,再运用语法,词汇,习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子,找出文中的错误加以修改.

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