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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有2处．涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Andy，
I'm glad to hear from you．You ask about my health in your last email．So I'm going to tell you about diet．I'm a very health person．That's why we live near the sea and we often have fish．I don't know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight，and there will probable be fish and vegetables．And of course there will also be some rices．If you come to visit me in China on one day，you won't eat many sweets．So I hope you don't have sweet tooth．
I'm going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I'll email them to you．I think you'll like our team's clothes．
分析 这是一封写给朋友的信，介绍了作者的饮食．作者住在海边，经常吃鱼．我还让父亲拍了球赛的照片，会用邮件发给你，你会喜欢我们的队服的．
解答 Dear Andy，
I'm glad to hear from you．You ask about my health in your last email．So I'm going to tell you about∧diet．I'm a very health person．That's why we live near the sea and we often have fish．I don't know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight，and there will probable be fish and vegetables．And of course there will also be some rices．If you come to visit me in China on one day，you won't eat many sweets．So I hope you don't have∧sweet tooth．
I'm going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I'll email them to you．I think you'll like our team's clothes．
详解：
1．ask改成asked；时态错误．句意表达的是过去发生的动作，要用一般过去时态．
2．diet前加my；句意表达错误．句意表达的是我想告诉你我的饮食情况．
3．health改为healthy；形容词错误．句中health修饰名词person，要用形容词形式．
4．why改为because；连词错误．句意表达的是原因．
5．and改为but；连词错误．句意表达的是转折，不是承接．
6．probable改为probably；副词错误．句中probable修饰谓语部分，要用副词形式．
7．rices改为rice；名词错误．句中rice是不可数名词，没有复数．
8．去掉on；介词错误．句中one day作时间状语，不用介词．
9．加a；短语搭配错误．have a sweet tooth爱吃甜食，常用短语．
10．for改为of；短语搭配错误．take photos of拍照．
点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．
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