题目内容
9.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文 中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修 改.分析 雾霾对我们的健康有害,每个人都应该采取措施减少雾霾.首先,要种更多树木,绿化可以减少城市的雾霾.树木能够吸收汽车尾气,由此减少污染.第二,政府应该惩治生产大量污染物的企业.粉尘是雾霾的主因,对人体有较大伤害.或许我们可以把公司搬到居民少的地方.第三,鼓励人们使用公共交通.最后,我们应该号召市民骑自行车进行短途旅行.
解答 Everyone should take the action to reduce haze(雾霾),which is harmless to our health.First of all,I believe that if we plant more tree,there will be less haze in their city.Trees can absorb exhaust fumes(尾气)from cars,thus reduce pollution.Second,the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes.Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people's health.Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live.Third,I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation.Last but not least,we can call on citizens∧ride bikes if they travel short journeys.
详解:
1.去掉the 考查固定搭配.take action意为"采取行动,行动起来",是固定搭配.
2.harmless改为harmful 考查词语用法.harmless意为"无害的",harmful意为"有害的".此处应是后者.
3.tree改为trees 考查名词复数.tree是可数名词,根据上下文语境要用复数形式.
4.their改为our 考查代词.根据句意:在我们的城市会有更少的雾霾.用代词our.
5.reduce改为reducing 考查现在分词.此处现在分词作结果状语.
6.where改为which/that 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词factories在从句中作主语,用关系代词which/that.
7.is改为are 考查主语一致.主语Exhaust fumes是复数形式,谓语动词也应用复数形式are.
8.greatly改为great 考查形容词.harm是名词,要用形容词修饰.
9.was改为is 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
10.加to 考查动词不定式.call on sb.to do sth.意为"号召某人做某事",动词不定式作宾语补足语.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | having appeared | B. | appeared | C. | to appear | D. | appearing |
A. | was seeing | B. | will have seen | C. | will be seeing | D. | have seen |
36.A.reflects | B.means | C.reads | D.explains |
37.A.chance | B.strength | C.reason | D.ability |
38.A.immediately | B.properly | C.right | D.accurately |
39.A.But | B.Because | C.What | D.While |
40.A.challenge | B.let | C.admit | D.help |
41.A.if | B.except | C.unless | D.until |
42.A.quiz | B.question | C.mystery | D.problem |
43.A.As | B.When | C.While | D.Since |
44.A.curious | B.good-looking | C.funny | D.serious |
45.A.knock | B.beat | C.strike | D.defend |
46.A.settle | B.bend | C.fix | D.change |
47.A.I failed | B.Not me. | C.I can't | D.Can I? |
48.A.think | B.imagine | C.expect | D.doubt |
49.A.start | B.help | C.close | D.stop |
50.A.empty | B.silly | C.reasonable | D.terrible |
51.A.realize | B.try | C.understand | D.judge |
52.A.before | B.after | C.since | D.because |
53.A.likely | B.unbelievable | C.impossible | D.possible |
54.A.runners | B.workers | C.competitors | D.players |
55.A.simply | B.seldom | C.usually | D.never |