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14．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符后（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor．I want to have a pen friend，hopeful a girl in her early twenty，and with interests similar to mine．In my mind，she is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis．Beside，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping that at home for some time．With such a pen pal，I hope I can share her my experiences in traveling，taking care of pets，or whichever we have in common．I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

分析 本文主要讲述作者要求对方给介绍一位笔友．要求笔友是一个大约20多岁的女孩，与作者的兴趣相似，对旅游，游泳和打网球有兴趣，还有要养狗以便分享照看宠物的经历．作者相信，有这样一位笔友，作者一定能提高英语．

解答 I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor．I want to have a pen friend，hopeful a girl in her early twenty，and with interests similar to mine．In my mind，she is someone interesting in traveling，swimming，and playing table tennis．Beside，it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping that at home for some time．With such a pen pal，I hope I can share∧her my experiences in traveling，taking care of pets，or whichever we have in common．I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
详解：
1．去掉for 考查介词．动词ask的后面可以直接加宾语从句，介词for是多余的．动词短语ask for后面通常接sth做宾语．
2．hopeful改为hopefully 考查副词．修饰句子要用副词．
3．twentytwenty改为twenties 考查固定搭配．在某人二十岁，应是in one's+twenties
4．interesting改为interested 考查形容词．be interested in…意为"…对…感兴趣"，是固定搭配，使用interested in traveling修饰前面的代词someone．
5．Beside改为Besides 考查副词．beside意为"在…旁边；在…附近"，是介词，besides意为"而且，也"，是副词．此处应是：而且，也．
6．that改为one 考查代词．that指代同类异物时表示特指，而表示同类异物泛指时用代词one．
7．加with 考查介词．share with意为"与…分享〔合用〕"，是固定搭配．
8．whichever改为whatever 考查连词．whichever无论哪个，后面有选择范围时用；whatever无论什么，可以没有选择范围．根据句意：无论我们有什么相同之处．没有选择范围，故用whatever．
9．would改为will 考查动词时态．此处指的是将来的情况，用一般将来时态．
10．learning改为learn 考查动词时态．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，improve与learn是并列谓语，都用一般将来时态．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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B．The increasing speed of flowering is beyond scientists'expectation．
C．Climate change leads to the change of food production patterns．
D．Food chains have been seriously damaged because of weather．
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A．plants'flowering is 8.5 times faster than leafing
B．there are 1，634 plant species on the four continents
C．scientists should improve the design of the experiments
D．the experiments failed to predict how plants react to climate change
31．Scientists pay special attention to the study of plants becauseB．
A．they can prove the climate change clearly
B．they are very important in the food chains
C．they play a leading role in reducing global warming
D．they are growing and flowering much faster than before
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B．Its change will lead to weather extremes．
C．It is 0.8℃higher in 1979 than that of 1900．
D．It has risen nearly 0.2℃since 1979．
5．The AIIB is an international financial organization proposed by China，____ aims to support basic construction projects in Asia．（　　）
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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文    中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修    改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
  1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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Many university accommodation offices have their own list of registered landlords （房东）．Others also provide information on accommodation agencies and other housing organization．The advantage of using your university accommodation is that you can get support if you have a problem．The disadvantage is that they are unlikely to have enough registered landlords to house all their students．
Property papers：Loot and Renting
Loot is an important source  （来源） of information about private housing for corenters．The offers are from private landlords，agencies and individuals looking for other corenters．They also have a website：www．loot．com．The advantage of using Loot is that there is some economical private housing．The disadvantage is that there is no quality control over the offers．
Renting is another useful paper．The offers in this paper are mainly from accommodation agencies．Their website is www．renting．couk．
Accommodation agencies
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Noticeboards
Around the universities you will find a number of noticeboards where offers of accommodation will be posted．These will either be from landlords or from students．Some universities will also have online noticeboards where students can advertise to other students．Advertisements from students can be an excellent way to find accommodation．However，advertisements from landlords can be problematic．
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Family
Faced with the very high rents charged in London，some students and their parents will consider buying as an alternative．In some cases this might be a good choice．
64．What is the advantage of using Loot？D
A．It has more offers from accommodation agencies than Renting．
B．It gives you personal information about other corenters．
C．Their website is designed mainly for students．
D．There are some good bargains．
65．A good agent can help youC．
A．know more people
B．find cheap accommodation
C．get the right accommodation quickly
D．get free information about most accommodations
66．The information passed on by word of mouth is important becauseB．
A．it is better than that found through any other source
B．it helps you find some of the best housing never advertised
C．the final year students always offer better information
D．the landlords have little valuable information
67．Which of the following provides the most reliable information for students looking for accommodation？A
A．University accommodation offices．
B．Family．
C．Noticeboards．
D．Property papers：Loot and Renting．

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