Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Allen来信询问你校学生参与劳动实践活动的情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1. 劳动实践内容（如家务劳动、校园劳动、校外劳动等）及其意义；

2. 你最常参与的劳动实践活动，并谈谈感受。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Allen,

Through the community volunteer service as a group, we are inspired to find a bright spot in the voluntary labor that can make us receive education and feel something, and guide us to understand the society and feel the society. In the nursing home, we talked with the old man as much as we could and tried our best to make him feel warm. We also help the staff to clean the nursing home together. And that kind of pride is not something you can feel in school. Our school regards the society as a place of practice, and lets us participate in the society, which has some enlightenment from the practice of voluntary labor.

Public welfare labor is selfless labor, but also cultivate our enthusiasm about public works.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Allen来信询问你校学生参与劳动实践活动的情况.请给他回信，内容包括：1 .劳动实践内容（如家务劳动、校园劳动、校外劳动等）及其意义；2.你最常参与的劳动实践活动，并谈谈感受。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Through the community volunteer service as a group(作为一个团体通过社区志愿者服务)；guide us to understand the society and feel the society(引导我们了解社会，感受社会)；lets us participate in the society(让我们参与社会)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。