4. [范文点评]

1)文中恰当地运用了转折,并列的连词,副词,上下衔接自然,如:what’s more;last but not least; however; what’s worse…

2)多种句型表达方式,同位语从句;原因状语从句;形式主语句式等… 如:…hold the opinion (opposite opinion) that…; it is convenient for people to ….

3)文章观点主题句与论据分类清晰,层次分明。如:Many people hold the opinion that the advantage of BRT system far outweighs the disadvantages…… However, some people hold the opposite opinion that BRT system may give rise to a lot of problems,(观点主题句)

三,举一反三

 [习作1]

假如你是一位导游。通过观察游客的行为变化,说明大众环保意识日益增强。请根据下面表格的中文提示,写一篇短文谈谈此种现象

几年前某些游客的行为
现在大多数游客的表现
乱扔废物,如塑料带,罐头盒,费纸等。
随身带走垃圾。
乱刻乱画,攀树摘花。
爱护花木.
在林中吸烟,引起火灾。
林区不吸烟,以防火灾。

[写作内容]

    1)请根据以上提示,谈谈这一现象,文章的开头已经给出。

    2)文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整和连贯。

With the time on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection._____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

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