4. [范文点评]
1)文中恰当地运用了转折,并列的连词,副词,上下衔接自然,如:what’s more;last but not least; however; what’s worse…
2)多种句型表达方式,同位语从句;原因状语从句;形式主语句式等… 如:…hold the opinion (opposite opinion) that…; it is convenient for people to ….
3)文章观点主题句与论据分类清晰,层次分明。如:Many people hold the opinion that the advantage of BRT system far outweighs the disadvantages…… However, some people hold the opposite opinion that BRT system may give rise to a lot of problems,(观点主题句)
三,举一反三
[习作1]
假如你是一位导游。通过观察游客的行为变化,说明大众环保意识日益增强。请根据下面表格的中文提示,写一篇短文谈谈此种现象
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几年前某些游客的行为 |
现在大多数游客的表现 |
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乱扔废物,如塑料带,罐头盒,费纸等。 |
随身带走垃圾。 |
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乱刻乱画,攀树摘花。 |
爱护花木. |
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在林中吸烟,引起火灾。 |
林区不吸烟,以防火灾。 |
[写作内容]
1)请根据以上提示,谈谈这一现象,文章的开头已经给出。
2)文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整和连贯。
With the time on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection._____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.