4. [范文点评]

1)文中恰当地运用了转折,并列的连词,副词,上下衔接自然,如:what’s more;last but not least; however; what’s worse…

2)多种句型表达方式,同位语从句;原因状语从句;形式主语句式等… 如:…hold the opinion (opposite opinion) that…; it is convenient for people to ….

3)文章观点主题句与论据分类清晰,层次分明。如:Many people hold the opinion that the advantage of BRT system far outweighs the disadvantages…… However, some people hold the opposite opinion that BRT system may give rise to a lot of problems,(观点主题句)

三,举一反三

 [习作1]

假如你是一位导游。通过观察游客的行为变化,说明大众环保意识日益增强。请根据下面表格的中文提示,写一篇短文谈谈此种现象

几年前某些游客的行为
现在大多数游客的表现
乱扔废物,如塑料带,罐头盒,费纸等。
随身带走垃圾。
乱刻乱画,攀树摘花。
爱护花木.
在林中吸烟,引起火灾。
林区不吸烟,以防火灾。

[写作内容]

    1)请根据以上提示,谈谈这一现象,文章的开头已经给出。

    2)文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整和连贯。

With the time on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection._____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

 
原因
1.  A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon (problem).
2.  The change in ...largely results from the fact that... (同谓语从句)
 
比较
1.  The advantage far outweighs the disadvantages. 2.  The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
 
批驳
1.  There is really a lot of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more significant fact.
2.  Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
后果
1.  … may give rise to a lot of problems. 2.  It will have a profound influence upon...
举例
1.  I am speaking from my experience 2.  Such examples might be given easily.
证明
1.  No one can deny the fact that ... 2.  There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
开篇
1.    Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2.    Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
3.  There is an increasing tendency that….
结尾
1.  From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2.  In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more            problems will crop up. 3.  Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...

三,实战演练及解析

1.[抛砖引玉]

广州市政府2007年1月16日,通过了在广州市中山大道(从天河到下远段)建一条公交快车道的决议,这将使天河至岗顶的车速提高三倍,并且公交快车系统的23条线路将在2010亚运会前全市采用,这个决议在广州市民中产生强大的反响。请根据以下提示,就其利弊谈谈自己的观点。

好处
弊端
1.  体现对普通乘客的关心。
2.  大大提高了公交车的速度,节省了时间。
3.  有利于发展公交事业,减少污染。
1.  浪费更多的人力去管理。
2.  下车后不得不穿过机动车道,人行道。

[写作内容]

    1)请根据以上提示,就其利弊谈谈自己的观点,文章的开头已经给出。

    2)文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整和连贯。

参考词汇:公交快车系统 the bus rapid transit system (BRT system)

According to the Guangzhou government Office, the bus rapid transit (BRT) system will be piloted on Zhongshan Road (from Tianhe intersection to Xiayuan Section) this year. The BRT system will be adopted throughout the city before the 2010 Asian Games, said Mayor Zhang Guangning.                                    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.2. [试题分析]

此题为议论文,从文中提示来看,我们必须从利弊两方面论述,符合对立观点的题型。所以文章条理一定要清晰,论点简明扼要的提出,论据要表达完整。可以选择一些表示对比,转折的连词及句型。时态很明显要用现在时。

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