题目内容
【题目】
【河南省洛阳市2017年高三第二次统考】 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a kid, my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city. Every day both my parent would take me to club after school. I played tennis ,ate snacks and did my homework here. It was basically my second family. A woman whose name was Li Li, my first private coach, was as a mother to us. She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis, but treats me well. She was kind or always trained me with great patient. In my heart, she was the best coach in our city.
【答案】1.去掉were 2. parent改为parents 3. club 前加the 4. here 改为there 5. as改为like
6. us改为me 7. what改为how 8. treats 改为treated 9. or改为and 10. patient改为patience
【解析】1.句意：我的父母让我加入了一个网球俱乐部。此处表示主动，故去掉were。
2. 根据both可知此处指的是父母，故把parent改为parents。
3.此处特指加入的俱乐部，故在club 前加the。
4.句意：我在那儿打网球、吃零食和做作业。故把here 改为there。
5.句意：私人教练像一个妈妈。故把as改为like。
6.句意：我的私人教练对我像一个妈妈。故把us改为me。
7.句意：我了解关于怎样打网球。故把what改为how 。
8. not only taught ---, but treats--，根据句意可知是并列关系，应用一般过去时态，故把treats 改为treated。
9.句意：她善良并且极大的耐心训练我。故把or改为and。
10. great修饰名词，故把patient改为patience。
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