Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你的笔友Helen给你发来电子邮件，询问你在当地历史博物馆当志愿者 的经历。请根据以下提示给她回一封电子邮件，与她分享这一经历。

要点提示：

1.活动的经历和感受；

1） 充当讲解员（narrator）,帮助参观者了解当地的历史和文化；

2） 给参观者，尤其是残疾人提供便利。累并快乐着：

2.活动的意义。

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Helen,

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Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours,

Li hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Helen,

How are you? I’m writing to share with you my volunteer experience in the local history museum.

Being a volunteer means challenges and responsibility. As a narrator, my daily routine involved introducing the local history and culture to visitors. On top of this, I spared no efforts to provide assistance for visitors, especially the disabled. My top priority was to make sure all the visitors could enjoy the comfort and convenience of modern tourism. Tired as I was, the smiles on their faces lit up my day.

The volunteering experience , undoubtedly , can help promote ancient civilizations. Meanwhile, It gives me an unusual chance to learn from the past, which offers me a new angle to approach problems. Therefore, I strongly recommend that everyone play a part in preserving history.

Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，和朋友分享在当地历史博物馆当志愿者的经历。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表明邮件意图

2. 活动相关

1）活动经历

2）活动感受

3）活动意义

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

history museum；volunteer；introduce；visitor；disabled；learn from；play a part in；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m writing to you about my experience as a volunteer in the local history museum.

2. I worked as a narrator，introducing the local history and culture to visitors.

3. I helped visitors and provided convenience for disabled.

4. The volunteer experience benefited me a lot.

5. I have learned much knowledge in the museum.

6. Helping others also made me fulfilled.

7. Look forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改