Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

1) 祝贺他获奖；

2) 肯定他付出的努力；

3) 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。

注意：1)词数100左右；

2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3)开头和结尾已为你写好。

参考词汇：the Chinese Chess Network Challenge

Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations

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Congratulations again.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.

“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition!

So I’m so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.

Congratulations again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封祝贺信。

第一步：

审题：祝贺信 祝贺Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖

人称：第一、二人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分祝贺Peter获奖，第二部分肯定Peter付出的努力，

第三部分想与他在网上切磋棋艺，询问何时方便，并再次表示祝贺。

要点：

1. 祝贺Peter获得中国象棋网络挑战赛一等奖

2．肯定Peter付出的努力

①每天坚持练习

②阅读有关象棋策略的书籍

③参加各种中国象棋比赛；

3．想与他在网上切磋棋艺，询问何时方便

4.再次表示祝贺

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

congratulations to sb. on …；win the first prize；be glad at；show interest in；keep on doing…；chess strategy；compete in；contest；succeed in；win the competition； champion；play Chinese chess；make progress

第三步：连词成句

(1)I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.

(2) You’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess.

(3) You keep on practicing it every day.

(4) You have read many books about Chinese chess strategy.

(5) You have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests.

(6) You succeeded in winning the online competition!

(7) You become champion of this network challenge.

(8) I hope to play Chinese chess with you.

(9)We can make progress together.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence , consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。