题目内容
3.某英语 刊物正在进行有关旅游的征文活动,请根据以下提示,以Travelling为题目,用英语写一篇短文,以便向该刊投稿.1.旅游好处很多:领略大自然以及其他城市的美丽风景;呼吸新鲜空气;结交新朋友;放松自己,强身健体;
2.旅游时可能出现的问题:天气多变;被人偷;可能受伤;
3.旅游的准备工作:提前了解天气信息;找个旅伴(travelling companion)相互照应;小心谨慎;避免意外.
注意:1.内容必须包括以上所有要点;
2.可适当增加内容,以使行文连贯;
3.词数:100左右.
Travelling is a very good activity.__________________________________
分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,以Travelling为题目,用英语写一篇短文.要点包括:1.旅游好处很多:领略大自然以及其他城市的美丽风景;呼吸新鲜空气;结交新朋友;放松自己,强身健体;2.旅游时可能出现的问题:天气多变;被人偷;可能受伤;3.旅游的准备工作:提前了解天气信息;找个旅伴(travelling companion)相互照应;小心谨慎;避免意外.写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.
重点词汇:make friends with sb(与某人交朋友);for example(例如);changeable(可改变的;不定的);catch a cold (感冒);have sth done(请人做某事); so as to (以便,以至于);
enjoy oneself(玩得高兴)
高分句型:1.You can breathe the fresh air,meet different people and make friends with them.
breathe,meet和meet在句中并列作谓语.
2.You should have clear information about the weather,choose a good travelling companion and be very careful about where you go so as to avoid accidents.
①have,choose和be是并列成分,并列和情态动词should构成句子的谓语;②so as to 后接动词原形在句中作目的状语.
解答 Travelling
Travelling is a very good activity.When you are free,you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature.You can breathe the fresh air,meet different people and make friends with them(高分句型一).Thus you will relax.
But travelling is not always pleasant.For example,the weather can be changeable.You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold in the rain while travelling.You may have your money stolen or may be injured.
Therefore,when going on a trip,you must prepare yourself carefully.You should have clear information about the weather,choose a good travelling companion and be very careful about where you go so as to avoid accidents(高分句型二).If so,you will surely enjoy yourself.
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全,关键短语和句型要写对,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,还要注意人称和时态使用要正确.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.
| A. | If only | B. | If ever | C. | Only if | D. | Even if |
Every Wednesday afternoon,for example,my mother(42)B me to another town for a piano lesson.During my two-hour lesson,she'd rush to the nearby store and buy a week's worth of (43)C.Given the fact that my mom had driven me twelve miles there,twelve miles back,(44)Afor my lesson,and bought me a candy bar,you'd think I'd be very (45)B to help her bring the groceries into the house.(46)D I wasn't.I generally just brought in an armload and left the (47)D for Mom as I ran to my room,shut the door,and started studying.
Don't get me wrong:even back in my room,I felt(48)Cabout not helping my mother more.Deep inside,I wanted to change my (49)A.But I also realized that once I did change,there would be no going back.(50)D I took on more responsibility,my parents would start (51)C more of me.At age fifteen,I sensed that this one small (52)B would mark something much bigger:my personal change from a cared-for,spoiled (被宠坏的) child to a more (53)D,caring and giving young man.
I'll never forget the Wednesday when I made a(n)(54)B to jump in and see what happened.Returning home from the(55)C,I disappeared into my room,as usual.But once inside,I felt that deep and burning(56)B.Throwing my school books on the bed,I suddenly opened my door and (57)C back to the garage to help my mother.How happy I felt that day!
Surely,over time,I continued to help out with more housework.The neat thing was,the more I helped out,the (58)AI felt about myself and my place in my family.As Mom and Dad realized they could (59)D on me more,our trips became far less stressful,too.In short,it was a win-win situation for everyone.
Sometimes the little things we put off doing the longest (60)A out to be the simplest things to complete.And feeling happy beats feeling guilty any day.
| 41.A.help | B.cry | C.start | D.work |
| 42.A.sent | B.drove | C.walked | D.guided |
| 43.A.fruits | B.flowers | C.groceries | D.vegetables |
| 44.A.paid | B.fought | C.applied | D.planned |
| 45.A.nervous | B.grateful | C.confident | D.unwilling |
| 46.A.So | B.And | C.Thus | D.But |
| 47.A.one | B.other | C.next | D.rest |
| 48.A.excited | B.curious | C.guilty | D.doubtful |
| 49.A.way | B.world | C.career | D.shape |
| 50.A.Before | B.Though | C.Unless | D.Once |
| 51.A.warning | B.reminding | C.expecting | D.informing |
| 52.A.work | B.change | C.opinion | D.job |
| 53.A.energetic | B.ambitious | C.outgoing | D.responsible |
| 54.A.excuse | B.decision | C.statement | D.appointment |
| 55.A.duty | B.store | C.lesson | D.holiday |
| 56.A.anger | B.shame | C.delight | D.pleasure |
| 57.A.called | B.looked | C.headed | D.handed |
| 58.A.better | B.smarter | C.warmer | D.harder |
| 59.A.live | B.press | C.focus | D.count |
| 60.A.turn | B.become | C.get | D.have |