Question

15．你是张伟的好朋友John，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信．
比赛之前：认真准备：如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻．
比赛时：保持微笑；忘词时不紧张，继续演讲．
写作内容：
1．说明回信的意图；
2．向张伟提出建议；
3．预祝张伟比赛成功．
Dear Zhangwei，
…
Yours，
John．

Answer 1

分析 写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯．要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．
【亮点说明】You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you．运用了并列句，同时也使用了限制性定语从句；In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicingbefore a mirror．本句运用了含情态动词的被动语态；Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges．目的状语从句运用的恰到好处；When you are giving the speech，remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words，don't be panic and just continue your speech，because no one will notice it．时间状语从句，让步状语从句，原因状语从句和祈使句完美结合．

解答 Dear Zhangwei，
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you．（高分句型） In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror．（高分句型）
Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges．（高分句型） When you are giving the speech，remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words，don't be panic and just continue your speech，because no one will notice it．Wish you success in the speech．
Yours，
John

点评 提纲类写作的文章较开放式的文体，比较好写．学生在写作的过程中，首先思路要清晰，要对所表达的句子通顺的说出来，遇到不会的要学会替换所用语，来达到同样的意思．在每一篇作文中，对于表达观点的句子，都要用上起承转合的连词来加强文章的层次感，适当运用俗语，运用平时常用的句式来使文章富有变化，表达地道得体．