题目内容
15.根据中文大意和英语提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于100词的短文,所给英文提示词供选用.注意:不要写出你的真实姓名和校名.假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友MIKE想通过你了解中国的传统节日.请你根据提示,给Mike写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国节日---春节的情况.
内容提示:1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日.
2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间).
提示词:剪纸:paper cut,除夕 on the eve of the festival,春节联欢晚会:the Spring Festival Gala on TV,放烟火,set off fireworks,压岁钱lucky money
3.希望他能来中国过春节.
Dear Mike
How are you?I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
Best wishes!
Yours,Liu Wei.
分析 【写作指导】
1.以第三人称为主,一般现在时,说明文.
2.善用已给的参考词汇,展开内容.除了介绍"春节是中国最传统最重要的节日"之外,还要按照"节前、除夕、节日期间"的顺序来介绍春节.
3.写作思路:总体介绍春节-"节前、除夕、节日期间"的主要活动-人们的感受(happy,excited).
【写作要点】
1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日.
如:Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.
2.春节之前大家进行大扫除,用剪纸装饰家里.
如:Days before the festival,people clean their houses.They think cleaning sweeps bad luck.They decorate their houses with paper cuttings.
3.除夕时全家人都要聚在一起,吃团年饭.
如:On the eve of the festival,family members get together and have big meals.
4.春节期间燃放鞭炮烟花,给小孩压岁钱.
如:During the festival,people set off fireworks to welcome the new year.Kids get lucky money from old people.
5.人们在春节期间走亲访友.
如:People visit their relatives and friends during the Spring Festival.
6.人们(特别是孩子们)是多么开心啊!
如:How happy we all are!
解答 Dear Mike,
How are you?I'm really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.(高分句型一)There are many traditional festivals in China,such as Spring Festival,Mid-Autumn Festival and so on.I'd like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.It usually lasts for 15 days.
Days before the festival,people clean their houses.They think cleaning sweeps bad luck.They decorate their houses with paper cuttings.On the eve of the festival,family members get together and have big meals.(高分句型二)Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.At midnight,they set off fireworks to welcome the new year.During the festival,kids get lucky money from old people.People visit their relatives and friends.They wish each a happy year and good luck.How happy we are!
Best wishes!
Yours
Liu Wei
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.