题目内容
7.假如你是李华,在暑假里,Tom 邀请你到他海边的家里度假.期间,Tom 一家对你很好,不仅陪你玩,还给你买了许多好吃的,这给你留下了深刻的印象.开学后,你为了表达感意,给Tom一家寄去了一封感谢信.注意:1.感谢信的内容,除要求的内容外还可以适当发挥;
2.词数100左右.
Yours
LiHua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息写一封感谢信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:在暑假里,Tom 邀请你到他海边的家里度假.期间,Tom 一家对你很好,不仅陪你玩,还给你买了许多好吃的,这给你留下了深刻的印象 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
I am writing you this short letter to thank all your family for the happy summer vacation I spend in your place.(高分句型一)句中I spend in your place.作定语从句
In those days,not only did you buy me my favorite foods,but also you show me around here and there by car.(高分句型二)句中使用了not only but also 句型
To tell the truth,I got a lot from you,and I have to show my appreciation to you for your love.(高分句型三)To tell the truth属于固定短语
解答 Dear Tom,
How is everything going?I am writing you this short letter to thank all your family for the happy summer vacation I spend in your place.(高分句型一)Although the new term has began,I can't forget the interesting experience.In those days,not only did you buy me my favorite foods,but also you show me around here and there by car.(高分句型二)I got much happiness there at that time.Especially,your care made a deep impression on me.Each time I think of it,my heart is filled with warmth.To tell the truth,I got a lot from you,and I have to show my appreciation to you for your love.(高分句型三)
Thank you again and I am looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
---_________ those drivers who only think of themselves.( )
A. | .to blame; They are | B. | .should be blamed; They are | ||
C. | .is to blame; It is | D. | .is blamed; It is |