Question

【题目】为了激发中学生创意灵感，提高学习英语热情，举办了题为“My dream home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。

房子大	有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有个花园；
房间多	至少8个房间；一层的厨房在卧室和客厅的中间；二层的浴室在卧室的左边，还有一个书房在卧室的旁边；
很舒适	可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房做作业；早上在花园读书；
其它	1).--- 2).---

要求：1). 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2). 要点须包括表格中的信息，但不要使用真实姓名和校名等；
3). 词数：80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：there be, kitchen, have a party(聚会), do one's homework（做某人的作业）
My Dream Home
I'd like to tell you about my dream home.

Answer 1

【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen:
I’d like to tell you about my dream home. My dream home should be large enough so that I can live with my family. It has two floors with a beautiful garden behind it. And there are at least eight rooms, including kitchen, bedrooms, shower room and reading room. Besides, it must be comfortable. At weekends, I can have parties with my friends at home. After school I will do my homework in the reading room and in the morning I read books in the garden. I think I will have a happy life with my family here.
【解析】本文是一篇以“My dream home”为题的一篇演讲稿，在写作的过程中要包括所有要点，时态要用一般现在时态，因为是介绍性的文章，一段就可以了。写作时要紧扣这些要点，并且适当的发挥，使文章内容更完善，结构更完整。写作时注意句子的完整性和表达的正确性，尤其注意主谓一致。文章可适当使用一些连接词，使逻辑更严密。适当运用短语和英语的高级表达，例如：so that所以，以便于； at least 最少；at weekends在周末；It has two floors with a beautiful garden behind it.有两层楼，并且后面有个花园。With，有……；I think I will have a happy life with my family here我想我会和家人在这里幸福的生活。