Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据表格中的信息，以“My Good Friend”为题，介绍一下你的好朋友Lucy。词数：60词左右。

	信息
	名字	Lucy
	年龄	12
	喜欢的颜色	红色
	常做的运动	打网球
	喜欢的蔬菜	西红柿
	喜欢的水果	草莓
	三餐	早餐：牛奶，鸡蛋 午餐：米饭，西红柿，鸡肉 晚餐：沙拉，面包

My Good Friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Good Friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Lucy. She is 12 years old. Her favorite color is red. Her favorite sport is tennis, so she often plays tennis with me after school. And her favorite vegetable is tomatoes, because she thinks it is good for health. She likes strawberries best.

She has a healthy eating habit. She has eggs and milk for breakfast. She has rice, tomatoes and chickens for lunch. She has salad and bread for dinner. We often help each other.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友Lucy。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： Her name is…，Her favorite color is…, She likes…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整的表达出提纲所列内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字叫Lucy，接下来介绍Lucy的年龄、爱好和饮食，最后指出我们经常互相帮助。此处plays tennis，after school，be good for, help each other等这些词组的运用以及连词so, and, because的运用也让文章增色不少。