Question

【题目】文段表达。（15分）

根据中文和英文提示，写一段意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李华，最近你的美国笔友Tony要来北京体验中国传统文化，请根据他的问题回复邮件，为他设计北京一日游活动，帮助他体验中国传统文化。请描述你们打算去的地方、具体的活动安排、以及这样安排的理由。

提示词语：traditional Chinese culture, tea house,Peking Opera, paper cutting

ToTony From Li Hua Subject A trip of traditional Chinese culture Hi!Tony, I’m glad that you will come to Beijing soon.___________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, Tony!

I’m glad that you will come to Beijing soon. There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. In order to experience traditional Chinese culture better, I do recommend Beijing Hutong tour.

First, we’re going to go sightseeing along the lanes in Hutong. The houses in Hutong are traditional, such as Siheyuan. From them, you can imagine how people used to live. Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look. Second, we are going to pay visits to a Hutong family. We can have lunch there and have a short talk with the local residents, which can help you learn about many stories of the past. We can not only appreciate the dramatic changes that Hutong has undergone, but also see evidence of the history of Beijing, experience the old way of life and exper ience traditional Beijing culture.

In a word, Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past. It is easy to know how people lived and had fun in the old days. So it is a good choice to learn about traditionalChinese culture.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为提纲类作文，要求根据Tony的问题回复邮件，为他设计北京一日游活动，帮助他体验中国传统文化。请描述你们打算去的地方、具体的活动安排、以及这样安排的理由。写作提纲已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各提纲所要求的内容表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如There are lots of places of interest in Beijing. In a word, Hutongs are the homes of common people in the past.宾语从句和定语从句From them, you can imagine how people used to live. Of course you can stop anywhere you like and it is interesting to take pictures or have a close look.的应用使得短文表达更丰富；表示顺序的副词First, Second, Finally,的应用更使得短文表述层次更清晰。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。