题目内容
【题目】Writing.
Time flies. You’ve already been in junior three for more than two months. You may have some problems in your school life. What is the biggest one? Please write a passage to talk about it. The passage should include :
1. what your biggest problem is.
2. what causes the problem. List at least two reasons.
3. who can probably help you solve the problem.
4. the possible solution to the problem.
【答案】I have been in junior three for more than two months.
During the three years,not only did I have happy time,but I had kinds of problems.My biggest problem was from my parents.They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons.They didn't allow me to play computer games or have outdoor activities with my friends.I couldn't stand the strict rules! So I told my teacher about my worries.He advised me to talk with my parents.
And then I wrote a letter and told my parents I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork.I would make good use of the time and try to do well in schoolwork first.After a long talk with my parents,they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like.
Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.
【解析】
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