Question

【题目】每个人身边都有朋友，请用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的朋友王丽。（80词左右）

外貌：高高瘦瘦的女孩，黑色的长发，戴着眼镜，喜欢穿牛仔裤。

性格：对人友善，乐于助人，但和陌生人在一感到紧张。

爱好：喜欢听音乐，尤其是流行歌曲，还喜欢运动。

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Answer 1

【答案】I have a friend.Her name is Wang Li.

She is a tall and thin girl with long black hair and she wears glasses. She likes wearing jeans. Wang Li is very friendly to others and she is always ready to help others. She often feels nervous when she is with strangers. I think she is lovely. She likes listening to music, especially pop music and she likes sports as well.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，介绍你的朋友王丽。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如wear glasses, with, be friendly to, be ready to, especially以及as well等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。