Question

【题目】文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以 “After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful” 为题,为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。

内容包括:1.你所参加的1---2项课外活动；

2.课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。

写作要求:1.词数90词左右；

2.文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

Answer 1

【答案】After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful

Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school.

In the volleyball club, I’ ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.

All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful为题，给学校的专栏写一篇文章，内容包括两个方面：首先介绍1到2个你参加的课外活动；然后总结课外活动给你带来的收获和感受。题目中只给出了写作的提纲，这里具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，结合自己的实际情况来补充，并使用正确的英语表达出来。首先要仔细审题，确定写作的提纲和内容；然后确定短文中应使用的人称和时态，通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要以现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。接下来列出文章中可能用到的词汇、短语和句型，把他们串联成句，为提升文章档次，在文章中要有几处亮点，使用高级词汇、复杂句式，如各类从句、非谓语动词等。语句之间应使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章具有连贯性，表达更加流畅。