Question

【题目】书面表达

从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名

题目①

假如你是李华,今天下午你应邀参加演讲比赛,因此无法参加外教的口语课。请用英语向外教Mr Green写一张请假条,说明你缺课的原因,以及你将如何补上这节课。

提示词语: speech competition, borrow, notebook, homework

提示问题:● Why will you miss the class?

● What will you do to make up for it?

Dear Mr Green

I'm writing to you to ask for a leave this afternoon. ________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your understanding

Yours,

Li hua

题目②

初中三年,你一定遇到过很多帮助你成长的老师,某英文报社以“感谢老师”为话题展开征文活动,请你用英文写篇短文给报社投稿,谈谈你最想感谢的老师是谁,并说明感谢原因。

提示词语: patient, trouble, encourage, confidence

提示问题:● Which teacher do you want to thank most?

●Why do you want to say thanks to him/her?

A lot of teachers help us as we grow up. __________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】题目①

Sep 28

Dear Mr. Green,

I'm writing to you to ask for a leave this afternoon. I'm invited to take part in a speech competition. So I am very sorry that I will have to miss your English speaking class. I'll be sure to make up for it when I am back. I'll borrow the notebooks from my classmates to learn by myself. I promise that I will hand in my homework on time.

Thank you for your understanding.

Yours,

Li hua

题目②

A lot of teachers help us as we grow up. Mrs. Green is the teacher who I want to thank most. She has helped me a lot.

Mrs. Green is such a helpful teacher. I used to have some trouble with English speaking. She told me to be brave and encouraged me to speak more in front of the class. Finally, my speaking improved with her help and I rebuilt my confidence. Now I am not only good at English speaking, but also good at other subjects.

I will always remember her kindness and be grateful.

【解析】

①本题是一篇应用作文，假如你是李华,今天下午你应邀参加演讲比赛,因此无法参加外教的口语课。请用英语向外教Mr Green写一张请假条，说明你缺课的原因，以及你将如何补上这节课。格式已给出。本文人称主要是第一称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，注意运用提示问题（Why will you miss the class?/What will you do to make up for it?）和提示词语（speech competition, borrow, notebook, homework），列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

9月28日

亲爱的格林先生，

今天下午我写信给你请假。我应邀参加演讲比赛。所以很抱歉我会错过你的英语口语课。我回来后一定会弥补的。我要向同学借笔记本，自己学习。我保证我会按时交作业。

谢谢你的理解。

你的，

李华

②这是一篇话题作文，话题是“感谢老师”，,谈谈你最想感谢的老师是谁,并说明感谢原因。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时、一般过去时等，注意时态的转换。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，根据主题确定要点，注意运用提示问题（Which teacher do you want to thank most?/Why do you want to say thanks to him/her?）和提示词语（patient, trouble, encourage, confidence），列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数不少于50词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

在我们的成长时候，很多老师都在帮助我们。格林太太是我最想感谢的老师。她帮了我很多忙。

格林太太是个乐于助人的老师。我以前说英语有点困难。她告诉我要勇敢，鼓励我在课堂上多说。最后，在她的帮助下，我的口语提高了，我重新树立了信心。现在我不仅擅长英语，而且其他科也很好。

我将永远铭记她的善良和感激她。