Question

【题目】作文

假设你是 Tom Miller, 今年12岁，是一名学生，请根据下面表格提示，介绍你和你的家人。

	Name	Age(年龄)	Job(职业)
Father	John Miller	40	Teacher
Mother	Anna Miller	38	Teacher
sister	Kate Miller	15	Student(学生)

Answer 1

【答案】

My name is Tom Miller. I am 12 years old. I am a student. My father and mother are both teachers, my father’s name is John Miller. He is 40 years old. My mother is Anna Miller and she is 38. Kate Miller is my sister, she is 15 years old. She is a student. Our family is a nice family.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。假设你是 Tom Miller,根据表格内容提示，介绍你和你的家人。根据内容可知，人称为第一人称及第三人称。写作中要注意运用一般现在时态来描述。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯。

写作亮点：作品根据表格提示，简单介绍了自己及家人，内容比较全面。时态及主谓一致上把握非常到位。结构紧凑，语言简练，层次分明。最后的一句Our family is a nice family. 为文章增色不少。