题目内容
【题目】书面表达(满分15分)
丰富多彩的课外活动(after-class activities)可以充实校园生活。减轻学习压力。同学们还可以在活动中强身健体、在合作中增进友谊。请以“Our After –class Activities”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你们学校以及你本人参加课外活动的情况。文章必须包含所给内容,并作适当拓展;词数70左右。(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)
提示词: 1.all kinds of 2. have; from...to 3. can do sports,... and so on
4. favorite activities 5. make more friends 6. learn more
Our After –class Activities
We have all kinds of after-class activities in our school.They are colorful.
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【答案】
Our After-class Activities
We have all kinds of after-class activities in our school. They are colorful. We have after-class activities from 4:20 pm. To 5:20pm. Every day, we can do sports , play instruments, study English and so on. My favorite activities are swimming and playing table tennis. I’m not the best, but I am very happy when I beat my companies. We can make more new friends here. And we can also learn more from each other. It is important that playing sports can keep me fit. I like after- class activities very much. What about you?
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文为话题类作文,要求以“Our After –class Activities”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你们学校以及你本人参加课外活动的情况。写作要点已经列出,要求明确,故要完成写作任务,务必把各要点表达清楚。
写作亮点:本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务,要点全面,结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动,例如We can do sports , play instruments, study English and so on. My favorite activities are swimming and playing table tennis.从句I am very happy when I beat my companies.It is important that playing sports can keep me fit.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之,该文是一篇不错的短文。
【题目】作文
假设你是 Tom Miller, 今年12岁,是一名学生,请根据下面表格提示,介绍你和你的家人。
Name | Age(年龄) | Job(职业) | |
Father | John Miller | 40 | Teacher |
Mother | Anna Miller | 38 | Teacher |
sister | Kate Miller | 15 | Student(学生) |