Question

【题目】回首三年的母校生活，学校里的很多规则有助于你的健康成长。请你根据要求写出我们的校规，并说出你对这些校规有何看法？以My School Rules 为题，写一篇短文。

提示 1. 上学不许迟到。 2. 每天必须穿校服 3. 不许在教室里跑

4. 上课不许吃东西 5. 上课认真听讲 6. 不许抽烟

要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；

2. 书写工整、规范；

3. 根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；

4. 词数：70词左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My school rules

In our school, I have many rules.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】 My School Rules

In our school, we have many rules. We shouldn't be late for school. We have to wear school uniforms to school every day. We can't run or shout in the hallways. We can't eat in class. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class. We aren't allowed to smoke in school.

I think our school rules are too strict. We should be allowed to choose our own clothes. That will make us more comfortable. We shouldn't have too much homework to do every day.

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你们的校规。所提供的材料中列举了上学不许迟到；每天必须穿校服；不许在教室里跑；上课不许吃东西；上课认真听讲； 不许抽烟，主要从这六个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I think our school rules are too strict. 我觉得我们的校规太严格了。句子our school rules are too strict.做think的宾语。

【高分句型二】

That will make us more comfortable. 那会让我们更舒服。more comfortable是比较级，做make的宾补。