Question

【题目】假设你是赵明，你班同学Robert患病住院已有两周，请用英文写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

1询问病情

2介绍近期班级活动：参加了运动会，并获奖；现在正准备歌咏比赛。

3表达祝愿。

注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；邮件的格式已给出

提示词语：miss sports meeting win first prize exciting practise worry

Dear Robert,

It’s two weeks since you got ill.

________________________________________________________________

Best wishes

Yours,

Zhao Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Robert,

It’s two weeks since you got ill.

Are you feeling better now? We all miss you very much. Recently we had many activities. We took part in the sports meeting in our school and won first prize. The matches were exciting and tough. But we tried our best and got the good result. What a pity! You didn’t watch them.i hope you’ll get well soon and come back earlier. We’re busy preparing for the singing competition now. We practise a song every day in order to sing best. Remember to have a good rest and don’t worry about your lessons. I’ll help you with them.

Best wishes.

Yours

Zhao Ming

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如feel better，very much，take part in，the sports meeting，first prize，try our best，get well，come back，be busy doing，in order to，have a good rest，worry about等。而复杂并列结构Remember to have a good rest and don’t worry about your lessons.和It’s two weeks since you got ill./ I hope you’ll get well soon and come back earlier.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。