题目内容
1.假定你是Lily,今天收到好朋友Mary发了的e-mail,在邮件中Mary说她最近总是感冒,嗓子疼,而且还时常感到疲劳和虚弱.请你写一封e-mail回复她,针对她的身体状况给出几点建议:1.多喝水,多吃新鲜的蔬菜和水果,饮食均衡;
2.要有充足的睡眠,加强锻炼,并邀请她周末去爬山;
3.保持好的心情.
要求:1.描述要有条理 2.书写工整,卷面整洁 3.80词左右
Dear Mary,
I'm so sorry that you are not feeling well these days.
Yours,
Lily.
分析 【高分句型一】
①To recover soon,remember to drink a lot water and eat plenty of vegetable and fruits,②which will be good for you为了很快的恢复,记得多喝水,多吃水果蔬菜,这些对你有益处.
①动词不定式表目的,做目的状语.
②which 引导的非限制性定语从句.
【高分句型二】
①When you getting better,taking exercise is a good choice ②because it can strenghthen you body当你更好点,锻炼是一个好的选择,因为能增强你的体质.
①when引导的时间状语从句.
②because引导的原因状语从句.
解答 Dear Mary,
I'm sorry to hear that you've caught a cold.I hope you're getting better now.
To recover soon,remember to drink a lot water and eat plenty of vegetable and fruits,which will be good for you.【高分句型一】You should keep the eating balance(多喝水,多吃新鲜的蔬菜和水果,饮食均衡)Besides,you should try to stay in a good mood as well as get enough sleep.When you getting better,taking exercise is a good choice because it can strenghthen you body.【高分句型二】So let's go to climb the mountain this weekend,shall we?(要有充足的睡眠,加强锻炼,并邀请她周末去爬山;保持好的心情;)
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Sincerly yours,
Lily
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