Question

10．你身边一定充满着爱，如父母的爱、老师的爱以及同学的爱等． 假设某英文报刊正在举办主题为"爱要大声说出来"的征文活动，请你根据下面提供的信息，以Love around me 为题 些一篇英语短文．词数80词左右．
内容包括：
1．举例描述父母的爱、老师的爱和同学的爱；
2．表达对这些"爱"的回报；
3．表达对"世界充满爱"的憧憬．
Love around me
                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground，I fell down and hurt my legs badly．当我和同学在操场上踢足球时，我摔倒了，严重地伤了腿．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．
 高分句型二
 If everyone gives a little love，the world will be a more beautiful place．如果每个人都献出一点爱，世界将会更美．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 Love around me 
There is a lot of love around us． One day，when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground，I fell down and hurt my legs badly【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】．My classmates took me to the hospital at once．During my stay in bed，some of my classmates came to see me and helped me with my lessons．So I caught up with others soon after I came back to school and passed all the exams【要点一，举例描述同学的爱】．I was so grateful．Love is giving and love is paying attention to others．Thanks to my classmates，I will do my best to give all my love to others．【要点二，表达对这些"爱"的回报】If everyone gives a little love，the world will be a more beautiful place．【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】【要点三，表达对"世界充满爱"的憧憬】

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．