Question

【题目】假设下周你所在的班将开展为期一周的研学活动。请根据下面的提示用英语写一则通知告知全班同学。

阳光农场之旅
活动时间	一周
活动地点	阳光农场
活动内容	1.帮助清理农场垃圾,搞好农场卫生;
	2.学习种菜、植树;
	3.野餐,采摘水果(苹果,梨……)
安全 tips	不要到河里游泳,不要单独行动。

要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,适当发挥;

2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;

3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上相应的位置。

参考词汇: rubbish(垃圾) clear away(清理) Sunshine Farm(阳光农场)

Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

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That's all Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimming in the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone.

Wish you a happy journey!

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

写作这篇写作需要写一则通知，主题是关于下周将开展为期一周的研学活动，需要写清楚活动时间、活动地点、活动内容和安全提示。需要注意的是短语的正确表达，适当加入一些细节使得文章结构完整，语言连贯得体。

写作亮点：这篇写作的开头和结尾已经给出，于是需要注意正文内容书写的准确性，首先应说明写这则通知的背景“Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm.”（下周我们班将去阳光农场进行游玩），要注意描述未来将要发生的事情需要使用一般将来时，具体的相关活动叙述需要注意短语的正确表达，例如do some cleaning做些清扫工作，help clear away rubbish帮忙清除垃圾，plant trees植树，grow vegetables种植蔬菜，have a picnic去野营，help the farmers pick fruits帮助农民采摘水果，go swimming in the river在河里游泳，leave the class group离开班集体，文章中也使用了一些精彩的句式，如we mustn't…我们禁止…，Nobody is allowed to…没有人被允许去做…等。最后结尾一段有祝福语Wish you a happy journey!祝你们度过一段美好的旅途！总体来说写作内容详实，结构完整，完成了既定的写作任务。