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11.如果你有很多钱,你怎样使用这些钱?请根据所给的提示词,以 If I have a lot of money,I will …为题写一篇不少于70词的短文,可适当发挥.
提示词::
1.a big house,parents,a happy life
2.build a Hope School,help poor children,go to school,get an education
3.give,old people's home,make their life better
4.travel,around the world,with family or friends
If I have a lot of money,I will              

分析 【高分句型一】
I will help the poor children who are in poor mountain villages to go to school我将会帮助那些贫穷山区的贫苦的孩子去上学.
who作为关系词的定语从句,修饰前面的poor children.
【高分句型二】
when I retired,I am going to travel all over the world with family or friends当我退休了,我将会和家人朋友去环游世界.
when引导的时间状语从句.

解答 If I have a lot of money,I will do many things.Firstly,I will let my parents live a happy life.If I can,I'll buy a big house with a beautiful garden for them.It's very important for me to take care of my parents.(为父母买房子)After that,I will give some money  to the Project Hope to  build a Hope School.I will help the poor children who are in poor mountain villages to go to school.【高分句型一】I hope they can all get a better education,and do something useful for our country one day,(帮助贫苦的孩子)Thirdly,I'd like to give my money to the old people's house to make their life better.(帮助老人)At last,when I retired,I am going to travel all over the world with family or friends.【高分句型二】(环游世界)
Well,that's about all I want to do.What will you do if you have a lot of money?

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来,在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体.同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点.

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