Question

6．研究表明音乐对人类的情绪、疾病，甚至对人的学习效果都有着重要的影响．请你以Music and I为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：你对音乐的看法是什么？在学习的时候你被允许听音乐吗？你喜欢什么样的音乐及喜欢的理由是什么？注意：词数80-100，文章题目和开头已给出（不计入总词数）．参考词汇：mood，learning efficiency（学习效率）
Music and I
Research has shown that music has an important effect on people．Research has shown that music has an important effect onpeople．So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music．If you have too much pressure，you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed．【高分句型一】People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music．And if you feel tired and sleepy，you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again．（对音乐的看法）My parents allow me to listen to music when I finish my homework．（昨晚作业可以听音乐）When I feel lonely and sad，I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up．【高分句型二】It makes me happy again．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If you have too much pressure，you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed如果你有太多的压力，你应该听流行音乐让你感到放松．
if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
①When I feel lonely and sad，I often listen to soft music ②which always cheers me up当我感到孤独和伤心的时候，我经常听轻柔的音乐能让我开心起来．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②which引导的定语从句，修饰music．

解答 Research has shown that music has an important effect on people．So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music．If you have too much pressure，you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed．【高分句型一】People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music．And if you feel tired and sleepy，you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again．（对音乐的看法）My parents allow me to listen to music when I finish my homework．（做完作业可以听音乐）When I feel lonely and sad，I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up．【高分句型二】It makes me happy again．（喜欢什么样的音乐及喜欢的理由是什么）

点评 短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到语句通顺、意思连贯，主旨健康，中心突出但同时切记不能完全照抄原文的翻译．此外，考生在进行写作的时候，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，是文章的内容更生动．