题目内容
16.亲爱的同学们,时间过得真快,2015年的寒假 (winter holiday) 仿佛还在眼前,转眼2016年的寒假即将到来,你打算怎样去度过呢?你一定早就规划好了吧,赶快把你的想法说出来,我们一起分享吧!Where did you go and what did you do last winter holiday?
Where are you going this winter holiday?
What are you going to do this winter holiday?
In the winter holiday,what can you do to help your parents?
要求:1.你的文章须包含以上的内容,可适当发挥.
2.80词左右.
How time flies!The winter holiday in 2010 is coming.Last winter holiday,I went to Beijing withmy parents.We visited the Great Wall and Tian'an Men Square there.I took many photos and I wasvery excited.As for this winter holiday,I am going to Shanghai with my cousin,Bob.We are going tovisit our grandparents and eat lots of delicious snacks.I am also going to help my parents do the chores,like sweeping the floor,making the bed and washing the clothes.They must be tired after a day's work.I am sure it will be a happy holiday..
分析 【高分句型一】
I am also going to help my parents do the chores,like sweeping the floor,making the bed and washing the clothes我将会帮助我的父母做家务,例如扫地,铺床洗衣服.
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事.
【高分句型二】
I am sure it will be a happy holiday我确信将会是一个愉快的假期.
be sure that从句:确信…
解答 How time flies!The winter holiday in 2016 is coming.Last winter holiday,I went to Beijing with my parents.We visited the Great Wall and Tian'an Men Square there.I took many photos and I was very excited.(去年寒假的经历)As for this winter holiday,I am going to Shanghai with my cousin,Bob.(今年寒假打算去哪里)We are going to visit our grandparents and eat lots of delicious snacks.(做些什么)I am also going to help my parents do the chores,like sweeping the floor,making the bed and washing the clothes.【高分句型一】They must be tired after a day's work.(怎样帮助父母)I am sure it will be a happy holiday.【高分句型二】
点评 以提纲提供情景的作文.这种形式本身的要点已经很明确,重点也很突出,只要把各个提纲加以发挥,注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题,但要注意,文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点.