Question

【题目】书面表达。

请以Mid-Autumn Festival为题写一篇短文。要求：要点齐全，书写工整，不少于70个单词。内容包括：

1. 中秋节是中国一个重要的(important)节日。所有的中国家庭庆祝它。

2. 总是在每年的九月或十月。每年这个时候天气凉爽。

3. 所有家庭成员聚在一起，吃团圆饭。喜欢吃月饼。有各种各样的月饼。

4. 晚饭后赏月，并听嫦娥的故事。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Family's Mid-autumn Day

Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. All Chinese people usually celebrate it at home. It falls in September or in October every year. At this time, it is cool. On this day，people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. The most popular food is moon cakes. There are all kinds of moon cakes. After that，people always watch the moon. At this time, people listen to the story about Chang’e. It is a day of pleasure and happiness.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍中秋节是人们的习俗。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Mid-Autumn Festival is ...；people usually get together ...；people listen to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达人们在中秋节过的快乐。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍中秋节的重要性，接下来介绍人们在中秋节的习俗，最后表达人们的快乐心情。此处用了At this time, get together，have a nice meal，all kinds of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。