2．骑自行车有许多好处。　

1．在中国，自行车是最为流行的交通工具。　

3．为了扫除假冒伪劣商品，……

Fake Commodities

Fake and poor quality commodities are a serious problem. Many things

can be faked such as soybean sauce, vinegar, bicycles, and many

other things. The interests of consumers are affected, and many

enterprises keep losing money because of cheap fake commodities.

There are some reasons for such a phenomenon. The major one is the

desire of some people to “make easy money”. These people think

nothing of the law of the protection of intellectual property

rights.

To get rid of fake and poor quality commodities, the government

should educate people to obey the law of the protection of

individual intellectual property rights and not to sell any fake

goods. The government should punish severely and close down all the

factories producing fake goods.　

第五篇：　

2．一些原因导致了这种现象。

1．假冒伪劣商品是个严重问题。

4、多次被评为模范教师，深受师生尊敬和爱戴。

参考词语

因……获得奖章to be given a medal for…

大学毕业to graduate from…

教育事业the educational cause

投入地干 to put one’s heart and soul into……

的方法ways to…

受到尊敬和爱戴to win the respect and love

Jim Green

This is Jim Green, a teacher who teaches English in China. Yesterday

he was given a medal for having completed ten years of teaching in

Beijing University.

Mr. Green was born in England in May, he came to China in 1986,

working as an English teacher in Beijing University.

He loves the educational cause very much. In the past ten years he

has put his heart and soul into his work and study. He has many ways

to make his classes lively and interesting. And his lectures are not

easily forgotten.

He has won the respect and love of all the teachers and students,

and has been given the honour of a “Model Teacher” for many times.

第七篇：

3、教学方法多样，课堂教学生动活泼。

2、刻苦钻研业务，专心搞好工作。

题目给出单幅图画要求考生加以评论的不多见，要求说明的倒可能会有，这时需考生调动的是已有的常识，根据一定的逻辑方式加以组织成文以清楚明了为准。如果给出单幅图要求写一篇叙述性的短文，如故事，事情恐怕就会麻烦一些，因为这里需要调动的考生的想象力和逻辑分析的能力。想象力是写作时不可或缺的一种能力。它可以把看似相对独立的几个画面联系起来，当然，我们说的想象并非天马行空，它应当受到逻辑的约束，是用来填充画外人情人理的细节的。

除了以上跟图画有关的两点外，还应注意写作中一些共性的问题，如审清题意，有时图画中没有出现第一人称“我”，但题目要求中明确指出短文要用第一人称写，如93年高中英语书面表达题，未按要求写的就会丢分。再如应注意句子上下的连接是否顺畅，篇章是否合理，还以93年试题为例，它是按时间顺序发展的一篇小故事，动作有明显的先后次序，写作时就不必加许多“之后……然后……过了一会儿……后来……结果…..”等等表示时间顺序的词，这样既可以避免罗嗦，又可以把有限的词数空间用在必需的信息的表达上。还有其他一些写作时应注意的事项，在此我们不就一一赘述了。

根据图表写短文，要注意以几个方面：

第一，审清题目，根据要求选择适当的表达方式和文体。如要求中只提到采用短文形式，则考生便可自主做宽范围的选择。如题中有特殊要求，如“作简单评论”，考生则需要从评的角度考虑问题。在确定了表达方式以后，还要注意选择适当的文体。不同的文体有不同的要求。如正式的信函形式要求有信头、信内地址，呼语，文末根据对象不同有Yours

sincerely或Yours faithfully及本人签名等，而普通朋友之间的信函可不写信内地址，称呼可直接写成诸如“Dear

John”样的形式，信末可写成Yours sincerely 或Yours

即可，如果亲密朋友，则会更简单一些。而文体选择合适与否，格式是否正确，也是评分标准中的一条，不能忽视。

第二，要注意图表内信息的连接方式。图表中的信息之间虽会有内在的联系，但在表格中的体现形式去是各自独立的，因此考生在写作时却不可照表硬搬，逐字翻译，否则写出来的短文会像一盘散沙，没有凝聚点，混乱滞涩。考生应学会灵活地使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。由于题目通常有词数的限制，因此在表格内容比较丰富，有些信息可能不具备提及的重要性时，可适当地删减其中的一些以满足题目的要求。

提到题目的词数要求，笔者认为有必要提醒考生注意。通常题目在提及词数要求时，有两种方式，一是给出词数允许区间，如100-120词，二是给出模糊数字，如200左右。根据以往的评规则，给出区间的应将词数限制在此区间内。给出模糊数字的，通常允许考生的短文长度在此数字上下浮动，过多或过少都要扣分。因此在满足了表达方式、文件等的要求后，词数要求成了考生同样不可忽视的一个方面。这就要求考生在保证方式正确、格式规范、语句通顺的前提下，补充或删除部分细节。删减的细节必须不损害文章大意，增添的细节和文中内容有紧密的联系，或可作为补充说明，或可起到修辞上的修饰作用。

总之，根据图表写出的短文，应做到格式正确、语句通顺、逻辑连贯，并应在词数要求的范围内尽可能简单明了地包含较多的信息。

[题 材]

仔细观察下列一组图画，请以“歌德的作品”为题写一篇短文。词数在120左右。

给出词：歌德-Goethe

[范 文]

Goethe’s Works

The father had a good stock of books, some easy while some abstract.

He loved reading. The son, instead, loved playing in the garden. One

day, the son went to his father’s reading room and asked for books.

“Want to read, Yeah?” Let me see, err…here, Robinson Crusoe. A

fairly good story,” the father said. “No, I want some thick books,

like the works of Goethe,” replied the son. The father watched his

son out to the garden curiously, wondering what was going on. On the

boy’s head topped three books of Goethe. After a while the father

walked into the garden, only to find out his son stepping on the

books and reaching for the fruit on the tree.

② 下面两幅画是一位美籍华人所看到的中国妇女地位的变化，请你用第一人称的口吻写一篇短文叙述画中的内。(字数：120左右)

提示：

第一幅画：指在旧中国； 第二幅画：指在新中国。

参考词语

解放前before liberation

轻视 to be looked down upon

长大 to grow up

受高等教育 to receive a high education

取得成就 to make great achievements

各个领域 in every field

The Change of Women’s Status

I left China before liberation. In the old days women were looked

down upon. They couldn’t go to school when they were little girls.

When they grew up, only a few of them could find jobs. At home they

did all housework. They washed all the clothes, cooked three meals

every day and cleaned the house.

But now they can go to school and even receive a high education. At

home, most of them are good mothers and wives. But different from

the past, they can do what the man do. They make great achievements

in every field. What a great change it is!

③ 价格-销量表

[题 材]

请对下图做一简要说明，词数100-120。

[范 文]

Prices vs. Sales

As is shown in the graph, people buy fewer shoes as the price of

shoes goes up. On the contrary, a decrease in the price causes an

increase in demand.

Business firms look for the perfect price at which the largest

profits can be made. If the price of the shoes goes up to $ 50, the

consumers will not buy all of 5000 shoes. The producers will have a

surplus of 2000 shoes and they can only get $ 50,000. If the price

of the shoes is lowered to $ 10, as many as 5000 shoes can be sold.

Still, only $ 50,000 is made.

[评 析]

本文第一段是对图表所反映出的事实作概述，第二段引用数字做具体说明，结构比较清晰。

As is shown…. As (can be) seen from the table (graph, picture,

illustration…)…. As (has been) proved…. 等是英译图表时常使用的表达法。

④ 世界人口增长曲线图

[题 材]

请对所给图表进行简要说明，并做适当评论。词数100-120。

给出词：人口爆炸population explosion

曲线 curve

[范 文]

Growth Curve for Human Population of the World

We hear a great deal about the human population explosion, and a

glance at the graph reveals why…. We see that human beings in their

first million years did not increase their total number greatly it

must have taken hundreds of thousands of years to break the first

million mark. Records exist only for the past few centuries, but it

is clear that the first documented doubling of population took two

centuries (1650-1856); the second doubling a little less than one

century; and today it doubles in only 30 years!

[评 析]

因题目中要求做适当评论，所在对图表做说明时，就必须先找到一个突破点。本题显然倾向于让考生以人口爆炸问题为议论中心，因此在落笔时就不妨先把论点摆出来，再援引图中所给的具体数字作依据，使文章产生强烈的震撼力和说服力。

⑤ 日记一则

[题 材]

请根据表格用英语写一篇6月2日的日记。

注意：1、日记须包括表格中所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯。

2、词数100左右。

WhenSaturday, June 2nd

Wherethe People’s Park

Howtake the school bus

Departure time8:00 a. m.

Arrival time8:30 a. m.

Programme

8:30 a. m.

Morning: rowing small boats; swimming; picnic

Afternoon: walk along the lake bank; take photos

Time to return5:00 p.m.

[范 文]

A Page from a Student’s Diary

June 2nd Saturday Fine

It was a very nice day. Our class went to the People Park. We took

the school bus at the school gate at 8:00 a. m. About 8:30 we

arrived there. It is a very large and beautiful park. Many people

spend their weekends there because there are a lot of trees, a very

large man-made lake and many modern recreational facilities. In the

morning, we rowed small boats and swam together, and then we had our

picnic among the trees. In the afternoon, we walked along the lake

bank, talking and laughing. We took some photos there.

We had a very good time there. We returned at 5:00 p.m. and got home

safely.

[评 析]

表格中的内容实际上是组成文章的几个要点，如时间、地点、方式、事件等，所以照表格内容顺序写短文是不可能的，必须另外找一个陈述的顺序。本文以时间为顺序，将所给要素有机地结合起来，使得全文条理清楚，井井有条。

十一 介绍人物

①

吉姆.格林在北京大学任教长达十几年，工作出色，为此《中国日报》准备刊登他的照片。请你根据下面的表格，写一图片说明，简要介绍他的情况。(字数：100左右)

姓 名Jim Green 性 别男国 籍美 国

出生年月1964年5月职 业英语教师

简 历1985年大学毕业，1986年中国工作，1986年至今在北京大学任教。

主要事迹1、热爱教育事业。

5、详略得当的材料处理。这一切都建立在细致的观察上。以97年高考英语书面表达试题为例，图中主要人物为哥哥和“我”，这是由第一幅画中的中文示意得来的，这个观察结果就奠定了短文的叙述角度，保证了作者的立场、观点、态度的一致性，同时也达到了题目要求。在确定了人物这一内容的关键，最基本的素材之后，把6幅图结合起来看，吃透几幅图要传达的主要内容，即哥哥和“我”这对违章带人者被另一对违章者抓住，接替他们受罚，等待下一对违章者，并充分理解每幅图的要点，采用顺叙的方式记录下每幅图的要点，以使内容完整，避免不必要的丢分。同时要注意删除不必要的细节，如那对违章者男的穿着白T恤，女的穿裙子，梳辫子，拦住哥哥和“我”时手里拿面小红旗等，将短文词数控制在题目要求范围之内。有时几幅画看上去挺相似，就要仔细观察图中人物的表情有何变化，背景有何变化。总之，只有计真细致地观察，才能从图画中提取出详实的写作素材。