题目内容
【题目】“中国梦”已经成为一个社会热点话题,根据最近央视的社会调查,不同的人群有不同的梦想。请结合表格提示,用英语写一篇关于“中国梦(Chinese Dream)”的演讲稿在你校将要举行的英语演讲比赛中进行演讲。
不同人群 | 梦想 |
城市居民(Urban residents) | 交通(transportation)…、环境… |
大学生 | 就业(employment)…、食品… |
农民 | 教育…、医疗(medical care)… |
你的梦想 | …… |
注意:
1. 对所给提示逐一陈述, 适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数100 左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Chinese Dream
“Chinese Dream” has become a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.
【答案】
Chinese Dream
“Chinese Dream” has become a hot topic among Chinese people. According to a recent survey by CCTV, different groups of people have different dreams.
Urban residents dream of having easy access to modern transportation so that life will be easier and more convenient. Besides, they hope to enjoy a better living environment and more public facilities. What college students are mainly concerned about is employment. Their dream is to have well-paid jobs in future. Meanwhile, they hope the government will take measures to solve food safety problem so that people can enjoy healthy green food. As for the farmers, they hope that they can enjoy good and affordable medical care and their children can receive a good education.
As far as I am concerned, my dream is to be enrolled by a good university and be a talent who can make contributions to my country.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,结合表格提示,用英语写一篇关于“中国梦(Chinese Dream)”的演讲稿在你校将要举行的英语演讲比赛中进行演讲。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如What college students are mainly concerned about is employment 是主语从句。 who can make contributions to my country.
.是限制性定语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语 According to , dream of having easy access to , take measures to, As for 等。副词besides、meanwhile的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。