题目内容
【题目】假定你是中学生李华。高三将是辛苦忙碌的一年,不管自己还是父母都会很辛苦。每个家长都是望子成龙的,处在这一重要的学习阶段,父母会对你的生活学习倍加关心。现在请你按照以下内容要点给自己的父母写一封感谢信。
内容要点:
1. 感谢父母这么多年来无微不至的关心;
2. 近段时间自己学习情况及取得的进步,自己会继续努力,希望父母放心;
3. 高三过后一定多帮父母做家务。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;卷面整洁美观
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出。
Dear parents,
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Love from,
Your son
【答案】
Dear parents,
The hardest time of my life is coming, and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life. I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion, because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years. These days I have been studying hard and have performed to the best of my abilities in the test. I’ll try my best to accomplish my assignment in the days to come. Please set your minds at rest.
After the college entrance examination, I intend to help you do some housework, which I have seldom done before. And I want to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner personally for you both.
My dear parents, everything is going well with me. Do relax!
Love from,
Your son
【解析】
试题分析:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,本文是给父母写一封感谢信,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。文章使用了很好的短语和句子:be worried about,say nothing but,words fail me,set your minds at rest,intend to,in order to,going well with,because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years.是一句状语从句,which I have seldom done before 是非限制性定语从句,Do relax是强调句。