[题目]短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Tom won an election. All his friends came to express their congratulation to him. He was glad that he decided to treat them with a movie. They were about to leave while the door bell ring. The door opened and in came his new friend, who hurried to join in them. They enjoyed the movie quite a lot. It was directed by an European man who had a gift for shoot films, but they would like to see much more movies of this director later on.

【答案】

【1】congratulation→congratulations

【2】加so

【3】with→to

【4】while→when

【5】ring→rang

【6】去掉in

【7】an→a

【8】shoot→shooting

【9】But→So

【10】much→many

【解析】

试题分析：Tom赢得了一个选举，请朋友们去看电影，大家都觉得电影很好看。

【1】congratulation→congratulations 考查名词。可数名词their作主语，用复数，所以用congratulations。

【2】加so 考查副词。So..that句型，他太开心了，决定请他们看电影，所以加so。

【3】with→to 考查介词。Treat sb to sth请某人某事，故用to。

【4】while→when考查关系词。While连接的是连续性动词，when可用于连接非延续性动词，故用when

【5】ring→rang考查动词时态。文章全文使用过去时，用rang。

【6】去掉in 考查介词。In后需接宾语，但是本句没有宾语，正常语序为his new friend came，故去掉in。

【7】an→a 考查冠词。European不是元音音素开头，不用an，用a。

【8】shoot→shooting 考查动词时态。介词for后接动名词形式，所以用shooting。

【9】But→So 考查连词。上下文之间是因果关系，用So。

【10】much→many考查形容词。Movies是可数名词，用many修饰，用many。

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