Question

16．假定你是某国际学校学生会成员，学生会将于暑期邀请某知名书法家举办汉字书法培训班，请你用英语写一则通知，要点如下：
1．培训班的目的；
2．学习书法的好处；
3．上课时间、地点：7月21日～8月10日，每天下午3：00-5：00；201室；
4．欢迎大家踊跃参加．
提示：书法calligraphy  书法家calligrapher
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节使行文连贯．
NoticeGood news for you!To help the students write Chinese characters correctly，clearlyand beautifully，a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term．（高分句型一）A famous calligrapher will introduce students to the idea of calligraphy and have students practice．
The class will be of great benefit to us．Firstly，it can help us master some necessarycalligraphy skills．Secondly，writingChinese calligraphy can also provide light physicalexercise and calm the mind，which can have a positive effect on our health．（高分句型二）In addition，it's a good chance to involve Chinese culture in our life．
The class will be given in Room 201 from 3：00pm．to 5：00pm．every afternoon，fromJuly 21 to August 10．（高分句型三）
Take the chance!Try something new!You just might be surprised at how much youenjoy it!．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是某国际学校学生会成员，学生会将于暑期邀请某知名书法家举办汉字书法培训班，请你用英语写一则通知，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：培训班的目的；学习书法的好处；上课时间、地点：7月21日～8月10日，每天下午3：00-5：00；201室；欢迎大家踊跃参加．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be of great benefit to对…有益；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；In addition另外；have a positive effect on 对…有积极影响；
To help the students write Chinese characters correctly，clearly and beautifully，a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term．（高分句型一）
Secondly，writing Chinese calligraphy can also provide light physical exercise and calm the mind，which can have a positive effect on our health．（高分句型二）
The class will be given in Room 201 from 3：00pm．to 5：00pm．every afternoon，from July 21 to August 10．（高分句型三）

解答 Notice
      Good news for you!To help the students write Chinese characters correctly，clearly and beautifully，a Chinese Calligraphy class will be opened next term．（高分句型一）A famous calligrapher will introduce students to the idea of calligraphy and have students practice．
      The class will be of great benefit to us．Firstly，it can help us master some necessary calligraphy skills．Secondly，writing Chinese calligraphy can also provide light physical exercise and calm the mind，which can have a positive effect on our health．（高分句型二）In addition，it's a good chance to involve Chinese culture in our life．
      The class will be given in Room 201 from 3：00pm．to 5：00pm．every afternoon，from July 21 to August 10．（高分句型三）
      Take the chance!Try something new!You just might be surprised at how much you enjoy it!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．