题目内容
8．请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．People who are your age，like your classmates，are called peers．When they try to influence how you act，to get you to do something，it's called peer pressure．Your peers influence your life，even if you don't realize it，just by spending time with you．It's only human nature to listen to and learn from other people in your age group．
Peers can have a positive influence on you．Maybe another student in your science class taught you an easy way to remember the planets in the solar system．You might admire a friend who is always good at sports and try to be more like her or him．
Sometimes，your peers can influence you in negative ways．For example，a few kids in school might try to get you to skip class with them； your soccer friend might try to convince you to be mean to another player and never pass him the ball．
Teenagers are the most likely to fall prey to peer pressure．So，their parents and teachers should make sure they don't submit to it．And the solution is not in isolating them from their peers．It's in teaching them to make good choices in life．
写作内容：1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2．用约120个单词就"来自同龄人的影响"这一话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）哪位同龄人对你的影响最大；（2）举例说明他或她对你的学习或成长的影响；（3）你怎样看待同龄人之间的影响．
写作要求：1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
The passage explains what peer pressure is．This pressure has positive and negative on our lives．Teenagers give in to peer pressure quite easily，so they should be taught to make good choice．
This reminds me of my classmate，Landa，who is the top student in our class．She has a positive influence on me．Once she noticed that I was about to give up halfway after spending ages struggling with my maths homework，so she offered to help me with it．Unfortunately，she couldn't solve the maths problem straight away．But she kept trying，and worked on the problem for several hours，I was very moved．I was very moved．Since then，her firm determination to overcome difficulties has inspired me whenever I has been in a tricky situation．
From my perspective，since peer pressure is very important，we should get closer to those who have a positive influence on us，and keep away from those who do not．．
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Once she noticed that I was about to give up halfway after spending ages struggling with my maths homework，so she offered to help me with it
一旦她发现我想中途放弃消费年龄挣扎我的数学作业后，她主动提出帮助我．
高分句型二：
From my perspective，since peer pressure is very important，we should get closer to those who have a positive influence on us，and keep away from those who do not．
从我的角度来看，因为同龄人的压力是非常重要的，我们应该接近那些对我们有积极影响的人，远离那些不积极的人．
解答 The passage explains what peer pressure is．This pressure has positive and negative on our lives．Teenagers give in to peer pressure quite easily，so they should be taught to make good choice．
This reminds me of my classmate，Landa，who is the top student in our class．She has a positive influence on me．Once she noticed that I was about to give up halfway after spending ages struggling with my maths homework，so she offered to help me with it（高分句型一）．Unfortunately，she couldn't solve the maths problem straight away．But she kept trying，and worked on the problem for several hours，I was very moved．I was very moved．Since then，her firm determination to overcome difficulties has inspired me whenever I has been in a tricky situation．
From my perspective，since peer pressure is very important，we should get closer to those who have a positive influence on us，and keep away from those who do not（高分句型二）．
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．
