题目内容
16.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My dream school starts at 8:30a.m.and ends at 3:30p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn't need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom,buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
分析 作者在本文中描述了自己理想的学校的情况,学习负担很轻,没有作业;环境很美,像个花园;老师和蔼,跟朋友一样.
解答 My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn'tneed to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,sat by the lake listening∧music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
详解:
1.they改为there;考查固定句型,这里应该用there be句型,表示"我们早上有三节课".故They应改为There.
2.didn't改为don't;考查时态.本文通篇时态都是一般现在时,主语是复数.故用don't.
3.many改为much;考查近义词辨析,homework是不可数名词,要用much修饰.many修饰可数名词的复数形式,故将many改为much.
4.with改为for;考查介词搭配.句意:我们有做…的时间.这里介词for表示目的.
5.hour改成hours;考查名词的复数形式.句子中的one and a half意思是"一个半",后面的名词必定是复数,故用hours.
6.look改成looks;考查主谓一致.主语是my dream school,是第三人称单数,谓语用单数形式,而且这篇文章使用一般现在时,故用looks.
7.去掉the;考查冠词.可数名词复数前通常不用冠词,表示泛指.所以这里flowers和trees均为泛指,不用冠词,去掉the.
8.sat改为sit;考查动词的时态,本文时态为一般现在时,故将sat改为sit,与前面的lie构成并列成分,意为"我们可以躺在草地上休息一会儿,坐在湖边听音乐".
9.listening后面加to;考查动词,listen为不及物动词,不能直接跟宾语,和介词to搭配,故listening后面加to.
10.helpfully改为helpful;考查形容词. 由连词and连接的两个词,其形式应该是一致的.由are kind得知应该是系表结构,故helpfully改为helpful.
点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思,抓住中心思想,结合语境和上下文关系,充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配,习惯用法,句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处,加以修正.
A. | or rather | B. | or otherwise | C. | rather than | D. | let alone |